《Li》Falling After Ethan
Reviewer: blue00grey
Falling After Ethan by AshisVanilla
Cover- 5/5
-I like the cover, it's simple but the details and text make it look pretty.
Title- 5/5
- Unique and interesting title.
Blurb- 10/10
-I love the blurb! It excites me as a reader and persuades me to read the book. I like how its short but it already gives an idea on the story.
Plot- 10/10
-Interesting and it grabs the reader's attention easily. Many stories have similar plots but I liked it when you made her character a bitch in a good way.
Grammar and Punctualizations-10/10
-A few corrections but it's hardly noticeable. Easy to read and understand.
Character- 10/10
-great characters! I loved their personalities, Abby's confident and bitchy type, 'it' girl and also Ethan's bad boy and famous type. The other characters such as Ashley are also great.
Storyline- 10/10
-Interesting story and how the events happen are smooth and the story is just great. J
Enjoyment- 5/5
-I enjoyed it. As I've said, its very interesting, the plots and characters are great.
Originality- 8/10
-I gave an 8 cause it isn't new but I still liked how you made it unique and just different, In a good way ofc.
Details: 5/5
-Not too much and not too little details which I admire. It gives the right amount and doesn't overwhelm the readers.
Engagement: 10/10
-The story was engaging and exciting to read.
Writing style: 10/10
-I like when you only write on 2 POV's, it helps the reader focus on the main characters other than them focusing and reading 3 POV's at once. As I've said, it doesn't overwhelm the readers.
Overall: 98/100
Keep up the good work! Your writing was great!
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