Reviewer: therosepoetk
Written by: Ebsrapamation

I think that the title is intriguing and interesting, and I like how you already made the choice to carry the plot on as a series. A lot of writers I know struggle with if they want to keep the storyline going, so I am glad that you as a creator took that initiative and already know that that is what you want to do with your work. The cover is extremely pretty, I adore the art style and how the visuals work together to send off those vibes to the readers. The blurb is very aesthetic and well-written, however, I think you should focus more on the content of it rather than how the readers will interpret it. A blurb should be a way for the reader to figure out what your story is about and whether they want to read it or not, so I advise that you polish up the spacing and vocabulary in the blurb to make sure that you’re really putting your best foot forward. On the other hand, the opening is nice. I like how you give context into how your magical realm functions, which is really helpful. However, in my opinion, I feel as though some readers will like the excitement of figuring things out for themselves.  the I feel as though you have the power to craft a story that is self-explanatory in the society you’ve created too, so I think that you can rework that element to your liking. But the plot itself is amazing - very original, very authentic. Magic itself is an extremely overused concept in writing, and I’m pleased that you didn’t fall into that trip of borrowing ideas from other writers and adapting them to your needs. I think that your grammar and spelling could use some work, as those are the bits that are irking me the most right now. (No offense). But the coherence is well-written, and I like how the perspectives of all the characters and their own adventures and woven seamlessly into the storyline. Speaking of the characters, I like them a lot too. I like how they’re all aesthetic and pretty, but they all have their own arcs and problems and relationships that are explored well within the plot. The emotional appeal is great, and overall, this story was a pleasure to read. Good luck on the series - and all the best my friend!