Reviewer: therosepoetk
Written by: AnecdoteofAstrina

First of all, I just wanted to let you commend you for revisiting one of your stories. As a writer myself, I know what it’s like to finish a piece and feel like you’ve cranked out your best, only to go back and see everything that could be perhaps polished up. I think that it’s a great journey you’ve decided to take, and that all your revision dreams come true. On that note, I really like the title. I feel intrigued by it, in a sense that I am wondering whether you are talking about River as a person, a personified object, or even a river itself in a physical sense. The cover is also really pretty, and I love how you have already built a branding around the series and that is clearly reflected on your Wattpad page. I adore the colour scheme and the graphics in general, however, I do feel as if the title could be minimalized in a sense that it looks a little too flourished and not the easiest to read upon first glance. The blurb is nice and descriptive, providing the right amount of detail that gets the readers invested in what you have to say. I suggest adding a quote or two, maybe space out the paragraphs to make the general blurb look more spread out and easier to read. I like how you added a guide to the beginning of the book, as to provide all the information that the reader needs. I personally would have found ways to incorporate that into the story itself, as to reveal bits of information piece by piece, but that’s just my way of doing things.