Reviewer: Unloveable_Night
Written by: Laiza1090

Title 10/10
- based on the title, the vibe gives me some goals nor fantasy. The title is pretty unique and I'm looking forward on what's inside in this story.

Cover. 10/10
- the first thing I saw was uraraka in the "my hero academia" right? 0-0 and the first thing I knew maybe this is a fan fiction of "my hero academia" which is made me more interesting because I love "my hero academia" And now the cover is pretty good as it gives me the exact theme of the story.

Blurb: 15/15
- the blurb is indeed exciting, as my curiosity mind want to find more on what's inside in this wonderful story. The written words were so powerful!

Storyline: 12/15
- first of all, it has a really good starting chapter. the prologue gives me excitement to read more of it, the first chapter were exactly what I expected. as the introduction is well portrayed. Your vocab are indeed understandable and easy to read at the same time, your dialogue is quite good as you describe what it need to be described well. The pacing is just doing fine as I understand the story well in a short time.

Characters: 9/10
- The Characters were developed describable and portrayed well in the story. As you gave them their own unique style as who they were, you gave them their own picture too on what are they doing inside the chapter.

As their vibe was indeed fitted, It gives the exact theme of the story. Good work!

Grammar and punctuation: 12/15
- I did not found much of grammatical errors nor typo which is a good thing for a writer to make this mistake.

But I suggest that don't add too much add on the sentence because it makes the sentence ugly, Example: "deku....." this is just my suggestion because I once did that too and some of my readers noticed that and approached me! :>

And also, I saw a few commas errors

Enjoyment: 10/10
- I did much enjoyed your story as I was so blissful in every inch of your chapters.

Overall 15/15
- You have a great potential to make your reader enthralled by the end of every chapter you make. even the chapters aren't too long, I did imagined all the written scenes in my head as mostly all of the readers experienced that, it was so indeed kind of you that you shared your thoughts through the book you wrote so everyone can read your masterpiece story. Excellent work!

You have a talent.

Total: 93/100