Reviewer: Unloveable_Night

The love letters of the cell 247 Story by jo_fab

Title 10/10
- I love the written title, it gives me want to read it!

Cover 10/10
- I like the theme, and it's something do to with the title as it gives connection between them. I love the fonts as they are placed well.

Blurb: 14/15
- the blurb is indeed understandable, But I noticed something on the sentence "they said a woman's heart is a deep ocean of secrets........ then what is that of a man?" As I did recognized that you put alot of dots on that sentence. But I wanna suggest that don't put too much dots on the sentence because it makes the sentence ugly. This is just my suggestion nor my opinion.

Storyline: 14/15
- the prologue gives me excitement to read more of it. As when I came to the first chapter, it was so good to read it as I don't want to put it down. it's gives me excitement on what's gonna happen next! The pacing of your story is good the way your describe them every inch of it but some of them weren't. The dialogue is indeed understanding too!

Characters: 9/10
- The Characters were developed describable and portrayed well in the story. As their vibe was indeed cool, the author gave the exact right POV on who's talking on the story. The characters were unique and gives the exact vibe of the book.

Grammar and punctuation: 14/15
- I didn't found any much of grammar errors and punctuation but the only thing that I noticed a lot is when you give many dots on a sentence.

Example: "she is with me......." well first of all, I wanna share you something of mine. I used to write a sentence with a same as yours, and when some of my reader/reviewer told me that I added too much dots. which is, it can make the sentence ugly. So I wanted to share this with you

too!

Enjoyment: 10/10
- I did enjoyed your story well!

Overall 14/15
- You have a great potential to make your reader want to read your story more. As when I read your story, I did imagined all the scenes that written upon it! it was so indeed fabulous cool, The reader is enthralled by the end of every chapter in your book.

Total: 95