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Scene starts in a weird place..... where everything is white and smoky.... there is no sign of peoples..... kunj is standing there & looking all around with confusion....

Kunj(to himself): where the hell I'm..... kesi ajeeb jagah h ye.... aur m yaha kar kya raha hu.....

He was damn confused what he is doing here & how he reached here.... he was busy in his thoughts @ that time he notice a figure @ a distance who was walking and going far away from kunj....

Kun(whispers): manikkk...

It was confirmed to him now that he is manik.... he shouts his name to stop him but he didn't stop he keep walking..... kunj start running toward him while shouting his name @ last he finally he catched him.... he come in front of him and hugs him tightly and start crying....... but for a change manik didn't hugs him back & standing with expressionless face like nothing is effecting him.....

Kun(sobbing):manik.... kab se bula raha hu m tu sun kyu nahi raha ha....

Kunj broke the hug and holds his hand..... manik still didn't get effected & watching him with numb eyes....

Kun(teary): Kaha ja raha h tu Jo tune meri awaj bhi nahi suni

Man:m ja raha hu kunj

Kunj gets confused

Kun: I'm asking u the same manik.... kaha ja raha h....

Man: esi jagah jaha na teri awaj mujh tak pohoch sakegi na meri tujh tak..... bohot dur ja raha hu m kunj..... jaha se log kabhi wapas nahi ate....

Kunj went numb listening that

Kun(stammering):k...kya.. bakwas kar raha h manik kuch Bhi bole ja raha h

Man(looking straight):m sach keh raha hu kunj

Kunj was looking at him with horror

Kun(teary):Nahi tu kahi nahi Jayega samjha tu....tu mujhe chod kar kese ja sakta h manik.... u know na I can't live without u....

Manik smiles and this smile is scaring kunj..... he don't want to loose manik @ any cost....

Man(smiling):u have to live.... mujhe Jana hi hoga aur wese Bhi ek na ek din toh sabhi ko Jana hota h....

Kun(little angrily): Dekh tu jada bakwas mat kar thik h.... tujhe ye suit nahi Karta..... tu chup Kar k mere sath chal....

Saying this kunj hold manik's hand and start dragging him with himself.... but manik remove his hand from his hold..... kunj turn around & watch manik shaking his head in no....

Man:Nahi kunj mujhe Jana Hoga

Saying this he start moving backward.... kunj try to move toward him but he can't it seems like someone make him freeze in his place.... he was trying hard to move but he can't.... @ last he collapsed on floor and start crying in helplessness and manik's eyes also gets teary watching him....

Kun(crying & pleading): please don't go manik please.... I can't live without you.... y don't u understand..... I need u please stop....

But nothing is effecting manik..... he keeps moving backward with teary eyes.....

Manik(teary): let me go bunny... don't make it difficult for me....

Kun(crying badly):noo...

Man: good bye bunny....

Kun(shouts loudly):kiddooo....

Kunj gets up with jerk while shouting this..... he was panting badly sweat beads r clearly shown in his forehead..... he looks here Nd there & find himself in hospital bed drip was are attached to his hand..... he realized that it a dream but for kunj it was worst nightmare..... he sighs in relief & take a deep breath.....

Then reality hits him that his kiddo was in ICU.... he immediately start removing his drip which is quite painful for him but right now nothing is important to him.... he just want to see manik that's it..... while he was doing this @ that time avantika enters & watch kunj removing his drip she panicked....

Av(runs toward him): kunj ye Kya kar rahe ho chodo ise.... pain hoga baccha..

She try to hold his hand to stop him but kunj removes her hand

Kun(panicking): mom mujhe manik k pass Jana h

Av(teary):kunj beta u r not well u need rest

Kun: ye kesi baatein kar rahi ho mom.... waha manik ki esi condition h Nd u r saying me to rest.... how could I mom....

Saying this he finally removed the drips.... in this his hand also start bleeding little but don't care..... he immediately runs toward the ICU.... avantika try to stop him but didn't listen.....

Kunj was about to enter inside the ICU but manav stops him

Man(calmly):kunj wait andar doctors r treating him u can't go now

Kunj sighs helplessly & looks manik from the glass panel....

@ that time doctor comes out all moves toward him...

Kun(impatiently):doctor how's manik.... he is alright na.... use hosh kab tak ayega....

Doc:he is still not fine or I say his condition gets more serious.... unki heartbeat Nd pulse bohot hi slow chal rahi h..... Nd blood Bhi kafi loss ho chuka h...... unki body abhi kafi weak h jiski wajah se he is not responding to any treatment..... agar esa hi chalta Raha toh hum kuch Nahi Kar payenge.....

Kun(angrily): are ese kese kuch Nahi kar payenge.... u r doctor u have to make him fine @ any cost....

Doc: exactly Mr Kunj we r doctors not God right.... Humse jo ho raha h hum Kar toh rahe h na..... humare pass koi magic toh h nahi Jo ekdum se poora thik Kar de....

Kunj sighs helplessly.... whereas manav gets teary again after all he is the father whose baby is fighting for his life....

Kun:can I go inside please doctor

Doctor was about to say no...... but manav signs him to let him go.....

Doc:ok u can.... but don't disturb the patient nd yeah his body is injured badly so be careful.....

Kunj nodded and moves toward ICU

He slowly opens the door and watch his buddy his kiddo is lying on hospital bed..... attached with so many machines and oxygen mask..... having bandage on his head.... the boy who is happy soul and can't sit calm for a minute is just lying lifeless here..... looking totally pale and weak..... the charm which he always have in his face is lost.....

kunj's heart bleeds watching him like this.... he slowly moves toward him & sit beside him tears start flowing from his eyes....

Kun(teary): punishment de raha h na mujhe..... but ye kesi punishment h yrr Jaan nikal rahi h meri aur tuje fark nahi pad raha ha.....

Kunj wipes his own tears.... Nd move his hand to touch manik's forehead but stops..... he is scared that if his touch cause any pain to him then.... so he moves his hand back....

Kun: bohot pain ho raha hoga na.... Kya jarurat thi tujhe jhut bolne ki kiddo..... kyu sach nahi Bola tune ki Tu kunj nahi h kyu....

He start crying saying this....

Kun:kyu tune mujhe bachane k liye khud ki Jaan khatre me dal di yrr.... Mene kya kya nahi Kaha tujhe for bhi tune mere liye....

He can't complete Nd start crying badly

Kun(composing himself):accha ho gaya bohot ab uth ja chup chap ha.... mujhe irritate mat kar samjhe jese humesha Karta h (he smiles in tears) I know u love to irritate me..... u remember that stupid prank of urs ha.....

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One fine morning @ kunj's home

Avantika is preparing breakfast.... at that time manik enters there & hugs her from back....

Man(smiling): good morning beautiful....

Avantika smiles warmly

Av: badmaash.... kuch Bhi bolta h aur kab aya....

Man(act like thinking): m..main 22 years before

Avantika chuckles listening this.... manik also smiles....

Av:pagal

Man:accha mumma where is kunj

Av: Woh so raha h

Man(confused Nd worried): ab tak so raha h.... is he alright.... fever toh Nahi h...

Avantika smiles at his concern

Av:are Nahi beta.... woh der tak padh raha tha isiliye....

Man(murmurs): padh padh k pata Nahi isne kon sa Einstein banna h

Man:m dekh kar ata hu use

Avantika nodded & he left for kunj's room..... he enters inside & watch he was sleeping peacefully..... at that time an idea strike in his mind he went near his study table & pick one marker he went near kunj....

Man(in mind): hehe Mr Kunj aaj tera makeup karte h

And he draw mustache on his face & leave smirking....he come back to kitchen Nd start helping & talking avantika.....

After sometime kunj wake up & went near mirror & scream loudly..... after listening his voice a avantika startled & manik smirk.... they runs toward his room...

Av(worriedly):what happen kunj y r u shouting

He turned avantika & manik watch him & try to stop their laugh

Man(acting):wow bunny nice makeup who did this

Kun(angrily):listen monkey.... I don't spare u how dare u to do this....

Avantika glare manik angrily

Man(stammering):wh..what I didn't do this

Kun(angrily): then who did this ha.... manik Tu Jada smart mat ban samjhe..... agar tune Nahi Kiya toh Kya mom be Kiya h....

Man(innocently):I don't know

Saying this he hide behind avantika coz of kunj's deadly glare..... avantika also smiles as she know manik did this.....

Kun(glaring him):mom k peeche kyu khada h samne aa.... m tujhe chodunga Nahi.....

Man:ha toh Kya pitne k liye samne aau.... pagal samjha h Kya mujhe....

Av(smiling): accha kunj wash ur face baby he didn't do this again ok

Kun(cutely):aap humesha uska side lete ho

Saying this he start moving toward washroom.... avantika smiles whereas manik shouts from behind....

Man:coz she loves me more

Kunj turns & again give him death glare

Kun(angrily):u Mr monkey I won't spare u

He stamp his feet angrily & went inside the washroom.... avantika & manik start laughing loudly at his cute behaviour....

Av(slapped playfully to manik): badmaash

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Kunj smiles amidst his tears

Kun:I'm missing ur pranks manik & see I also agree that mom loves u more..... ab uth ja yrr Nahi toh mujhe gussa ajayega..... don't think ki gussa sirf tujhe hi ata h....

But manik seems unresponsive to kunj..... this makes kunj heartbroken.... he remembers his good time with manik....

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Kunj is in kitchen & making pasta for himself as there is no-one in home..... @ that time he heard doorbell.... he went to open the door Nd watch manik is there kunj smiles watching him & manik too both hugs eachother......

Kun: hi kiddo....

Man: Hy bunny....

Both come inside & went to kitchen kunj again continues his work & manik sits on kitchen slab

Man: kya Bana Raha h

Kunj(busy in his work): my favourite pasta

Man(excitedly):wow looking yummy

Kun(proudly):I know

Man: ha ha thik h

After sometime kunj finished his cooking

Kun:m fresh hokar ata Hu ok

Manik nodded and kunj leaves to his room

Here manik is sitting Nd getting bored.... he looked at pasta it was looking really very tasty.... he think to try one bite & he take out the pasta in plate Nd have it.... it was yummy manik again eat and he didn't realized when he ate whole pasta (don't worry it was not too much it's just for two people so sometime we normally ate that much if it was 😂)

@ that time kunj comes down after fresh n up he went near manik Nd watch he is sitting in kitchen slab licking his fingers..... he than look toward his pasta's bowl & it was empty....

Kun(dangerously):manik malhotraaa....

Manik looks at kunj Nd realized what he did..... he immediately stands up like an obedient child.... whereas kunj is glaring him....

Man(to himself):shitt.... Manik can't u control urself..... ab kunj k andar kaali mata ajayengi..... ab mujhe koi nahi bacha sakta.... bhagwan ji bacha lo apne is masoom bacche ko....

Saying this he make a puppy face.... but kunj is still glaring him....

Kun(pointing toward bowl): what is this

Man(act as normal):ye...this is bowl

Kunj raised his eyebrows angrily manik gulp

Man(in mind):o shitt bhagwan ji ye toh ghur ghur k hi mujhe marega lagta h

Kun(gritting his teeth): don't act smart manik.... y u ate my pasta.... u idiot donkey.... monkey.... Woh Dono k liye tha.... not only for u....

Man(stammering):wo...Woh.. yrr Woh itna yummy tha mujhse control hi Nahi hua yrr sorry..... u know na how much big foodie I am (pouts & hold his ears cutely)....

Kunj smiles listening this but he hides

Kun(fake anger): o really.... aur mujhe Jo bhuk lagi h uska kya ha....

Man(immediately):ha m bana deta hu na tere liye

Kun:oyee rehne de.... mujhe tera jala hua pasta khakar marna nahi h....

This line makes manik angry.... coz the word death makes manik super angry..... after losing his mother he don't want to listen this word he hate it....

kunj realized what he said....he closed his eyes & slapped himself mentally....

Man(glaring kunj): mind ur tongue kunj sarna tumhe bhuk lagi h na wait

Saying this he drag kunj to the dining table Nd made him sit..... & he went inside the kitchen...

Kunj is waiting for manik impatiently as he knows very well that manik don't know cooking..... so it was making him worried what he is doing inside..... but he can't go inside coz monster is awaked now 😂......After sometime manik come outside with a bowl kunj sighs in relief..... manik placed bowl in front of kunj... kunj gets happy watching it

Kunj(happily): wow manik Maggie yippee

He stands up & hugs manik

Man:bas Kar Jada maska mat laga.... I know u don't like Maggie too much.... so itna excited hone Ka drama Mat Kar & kha le jaldi se....

Kunj smiles & start eating manik also smiles

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Kunj caresses his hairs

Kun:Mene galti se bola aur tu gussa ho Gaya ha..... aur ab Tu kya kar raha h yrr please uth ja.... m kabhi tujhse Nahi ladunga kabhi bhi nahi..... I know bohot hurt Kiya h Mene.... but I promise esa fir kabhi nahi hoga kabhi nahi.....

Manik's silence is killing kunj..... manik who always talk like chatter box is now totally silent...... he remembers manik's baseless talks.... he closes his eyes and lost in his memories....

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It was night time kunj & manik was in manik's room.... where we can see kunj is studying or I say trying to study coz manik's bak-bak is disturbing him..... & manik is doing something on phone & talking with kunj....

Man(showing him mobile):kunj ye black wali shirt kesi h

Yes manik is doing online shopping.... kunj without looking on mobile....

Kun:hmm acchi h

Man: Kya acchi h tune Dekha tak toh h nahi aur bol raha h acchi h....

Kun(still studying): manik mujhe padhne de.... irritate mat kar...

Manik glares him & then again get busy in his work.... are sometime he again shows his mobile to kunj...

Man(excitedly): ye wale shoes Dekh it was so classy na.... m ise order Kar raha hu.... tujhe Chahiye kya toh m ek aur order karta hu....

Kunj gets frustrated from his talk coz he don't able to concentrate on his study coz of his talks

Kun(irritate): will u please shut up manik.... let me study do din bad exam h....

Man: ha toh do din h na.... abhi se padhne ki kya jarurat h....

Kun(glares him): matlab tu nahi shant rahega.... jab se chapar chapar laga h muh dard nahi deta tera.... irritate Kar rakha h bilkul.... ab ekdum shant rehna samjha.... ek shabd bhi mat nikaliyo....

Manik pouts listening this.... whereas kunj start studying again....

Man(slowly):meri chapar chapar se irritate hota h tu

Kun(irritated):ha bohot

Man(pouts):huh.... thik h na beta... ek din tu meri yahi chapar chapar sunne k liye plead karega.... tab m bhi bhao khaunga dekh lena...aur tujhse bilkul baat nahi karunga....

Saying this he also start studying

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Kunj opens his eyes with jerk & hold manik's hand softly Nd carefully without hurting him....

Kun: ese toh Kabhi koi baat seriously Nahi leta.... fir ye kyu le liya yrr.... tu esa shant bilkul Bhi accha nahi lag Raha suna tune.... chal ab uth ja please yrr please....

Tears start flowing again from his eyes

Screen freeze on manik's lifeless Nd kunj's crying face

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Precap: manik's condition

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Few words for kunj's mother

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Few words for manik's dad

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