Part-9
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Continuing from previous part
Scenes starts from ICU.... where manik is still lying in the same condition & kunj is sleeping there in sitting position beside him..... as he is also very tired & not well so he didn't realize when sleep took over him.... His sleep get disturb from the voice of nurse.... who arrived there to check manik.... he immediately gets up and stand....
Nurse: sir aap bahar jayiye.... jada Der tak patient k pas rehna allowed nahi h.....
Kunj nodded & move outside half-heartedly
Outside the ICU avantika & manav r sitting.... kunj comes out Nd sit beside avantika & put his head in hes shoulder..... she caresses his hairs softly..... but kunj is lost somewhere....
Av: Kya hua kunj
Kun(still in same position): mom Mene manik ko itna shant aur kamjor kabhi nahi dekha.... u know jab woh bimar bhi hota tha na..... tab bhi woh itna shant nahi rehta tha... uski non-stop bak bak tab bhi chalti rehti thi.... par aaj manik kuch bol hi nahi raha h.....mujhe ye wala manik nahi pasand araha mom.... mujhe mera manik chahiye.... mera kiddo...jo khud bhi happy rehta h... aur sabko happy rakhta h....
Tears start flowing from avantika & manav's eyes listening this..... kunj broke the hug and look toward avantika painfully.....
Kun(teary): his silence is killing me mom
Avantika hugs him and try to console him
Av:he will be fine kunj.... he will....
Two weeks passed like this.... there is still no improvement in manik's condition..... still there is same routine of avantika, twinkle & Nandini of coming hospital to watch manik..... but kunj & manav didn't leave hospital from two weeks..... only once or twice only they went home.... That to after alot of convenience from others & only for one or two hours.......
One day
All r sitting in front of ICU..... at that time doctor comes there manav & kunj start asking him about manik's condition..... @ that time a nurse comes out hurriedly..... all look toward her with confusion.....
Nur:sir patient ki condition bigadti ja rahi h.... aap jaldi chaliye.....
Listening this all gets tensed.... while doctor runs inside the ICU and start manik's treatment....
Here outside all r paying for manik
After sometime
Doctor came out looking gloomy.... He went up to the others....
Kun(impatiently): Dr.... manik... wo ab theek hai na?
Doc Dekhiye Mr malhotra..... main jhooth nahi bolunga..... Manik ki condition is extremely critical..... Unka bahut zyada blood loss ho gaya hai aur body k Kai part buri tarah damage huye h Ab shayad hi wo bach payein...... Humne unhe ventilator par rakha hua hai....he don't have much time.. . only few hours.... kuch ghante hain unke pass bas.....
All get horrified listening this
Manav(hoping he listened wrong): Matlab?
Doc: I am sorry Mr malhotra.... Humne bahut koshish ki lekin manik zyada se zyada sirf ek ghanta ya usse Kam hi aur zin...
Kunj shouts before doctor completed his sentence
Kun(shout):noooo.....(stammering) y...ye Nahi.... ho sak..ta.. k..kuch....bhi bole ja rahe h.... aap jhut bol rahe h.... ye sab jhut h.... manik mujhe chod kar kahi nahi ja sakta..... samjhe aap...
Kunj is totally shattered after listening this.... he can't able believe what doctor just said.... the fear of losing manik is just enough to make kunj vulnerable.....
While others conditions r also not less than kunj..... manik is very important part of everyone over there's life.... they can't able to believe whatever doctor just said..... especially manav he was just standing numb the fear of losing manik is clearly visible on his face.... The father who just realized his mistake and want to live peacefully with him but destiny played very cruel game with him....he is not in a state to say anything....
Their trance broken by kunj's voice who is shouting at doctor
Kun(shouting):kuch kijiye na doctor... please.....
Doc: Mr Kunj.... m aapke emotions samajhta hu woh aapke bohot close hai..... Lekin is samay aap logon ko unhe.... unke aakhiri samay me khush rakhna chahiye..... Wo abhi hosh me hai.... Aap sab unse mil sakte hain.....
Kunj stumbles listening this & manav collapse on the floor..... while others were crying badly.... they are just shattered....
Kun(whispers): manikkk... sirf kuch ghante...
Twinkle looks @ kunj she wipes her tears and move toward him.... she put his hands on his shoulder kunj turn around and look @ her painfully..... then hugged her tightly & start crying badly....
Kun(crying):t...tum..ne... su..na.. na... twinkle... Dr... kya bol rahe h.... Manik ese kese mujhe chod k ja sakta h
Twinkle gets teary listening this.... she broke the hug and make him sit....
Kun(sobbing): kitna kuch kehna h mujhe twinkle..... mujhe apni galtiyaan sudharna h but...sab meri galti h.... sab meri wajah se ho raha h... mujhe bachane k liye he....
Saying this he again broke down twinkle hugs him
Nan(stammering):use ye pata h doctor
All looks curiously toward doctor
Doc: Haan..... Mujhe laga ki ye baat unse chhupana galat hoga..... Shaayad unhe kuch adhoore kaam poore karne ho.... Toh....
Nandini started crying..... Avantika hugged kunj who was shocked listening this..... Twinkle went toward manav to console him.....manav finally broke the silence
Manav(with hope): Dr...... kya sach me ab kuch nahi ho sakta?
Doc: Kehne ko to namumkin kuch bhi nahi hai..... Lekin sab bhagwaan ke haath me hai..... Agar manik bach gaya, jiske chances bilkul nahi hain to ye ek miracle hi hoga..... Hum ab kuch nahi kar sakte.....
Everyone's hope gets shattered badly now noone have words to say further
Doc:mujhe lagta h aap logo ko Jada der nahi Karni Chahiye...... he already have less time go Nd meet him....
All nodded nd entered inside the ICU..... all watched Manik who was looking very weak & pale.... he was lying with his eyes closed....
they move toward him except kunj he is just standing near the door.... Manav went near him first and kissed his forehead....after feeling this manik slowly opens his & gets shocked watching his father there....
Man(weakly):dadd..... A..ap... ya...ha..
Manav gets teary again.... he sit beside him and caresses his face lovingly....
Manav(crying):ha baccha m.... ye kya halat bana li baby apni...
Man(sadly):Aa...pne... fir... der kar di dad.... ab toh waqt hi nahi h mere pas.....
All gets more sad listening this.... especially kunj he just want to slap manik for talking this nonsense..... but he controlled himself..... he already dying in guilt.....
Here manav put his hand on his mouth to stop
Manav(controlling his tears): kesi baatein kar rahe ho baccha..... kuch Nahi hoga tumhe samjhe tum..... kuch Nahi hone dunga m tumhe..... m world k best doctors se consult karunga... tum bilkul chinta mat karo....
Man(smiles painfully):ab kuch nahi ho sakta dad.... I know.... don't give false hope to urself....
Listening this he start crying badly holding manik's hand
Manav(sobbing):I'm sorry..... I'm sorry baccha.... I'm the worst dad.... kabhi tumhe time nahi de paya..... jab bhi tumhe meri jarurat thi m kabhi tumhare pass nahi tha..... I'm very bad..... but please baccha mujhe chod Kar mat jao.... m mar jaunga please....
Manik can't see his father like this..... no matter what he is his father..... he slowly moves his hand and wipes manav's tears & nodded in no to stop him from crying......
Man:I love... you... dad....
Manav(kissed his forehead): I love you too mera baccha....
Manik closed his eyes for a second, to feel the moment for one last time and then again opened his eyes.
Manav strands up so that other talks with him
Avantika went near him..... She is also crying...... Manik nodded in no as he can't see her like this.... avantika smiles in tear & kissed his forehead.....
Av(teary): manik... baccha...
Man (holding her hand): Thank you... Mumma... aap ne mujhe... aaah... bahut pyar diya... thank you... very much...
Av(placed her hand on his cheek): mumma ko thanks bologe ab
Manik nodded in no
Av: Mera baccha.....
then she move away & twinkle come near him
Twi(teary): Oye Mr malhotra..... Tum toh khud ko hero kehte ho..... Aur hero ko kuch Nahi hota.... woh toh end me jeet hi jaata hai... & I'm sure tum Bhi jeetoge tumhe kuch bhi nahi hoga...
Man(smiles faintly): heroes real life me nahi hote twinkle...
Twi(caresses his hairs):but I believe manik ki tumhe kuch nahi hoga
Manik smiles then his eyes lands on nandini who was standing in corner & crying...... he smiles looking @ her..... nandini immediately runs toward him & hold his hand softly and start crying.,... she don't care now that all r watching her....
Nan: manik... mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai...
She was getting terrified.... she hugged him very softly.....
Man(kissed her head): don't scare nandu..... I'm always with u in ur heart be brave... & Keep smiling always...
Nan(sobbing): I won't manik..... Without u how could I smile..... Tum chale jaoge to mujhe teas kaun karega....mujhe kon hasayega.... m nahi reh paungi tumhare bina.... manik please don't?
Man: mujhe Jana Hoga nandu...fir m tum sab ko tang bhi toh bohot karta hu na.... ab koi nahi karega....
Nan: Shut up manik...
Manik give a small smile.... Nandini stands up....
Nan:hum bahar h manik..... doctor ne Jada logo ko allow Nahi kiya na....
Manik nodded nd all left outside except manav & kunj.... manik look toward kunj who was still standing near door with no emotion..... manik want to talk to him he want to hug him at least for last time.... but he think kunj is still angry so shove off the thaught.....
Manav know that manik & kunj both r dying to talk with eachother.... but noone is going to initiate so he decide to talk....
Manav(caressing his face):baccha..... see kunj is here tum usse bat nahi karoge....
Both kunj & manik look at eachother painfully..... manik remembers kunj's word which he told him.....
Man(teary): he don't need me dad...
Kunj immediately looks at manik he was very guilty now..... & manik is totally shattered...... that's y he want to remove every pain before leaving the world.... manav understand this so he decide to listen his words quietly....
Man(teary):us..ne... mujhse.... dosti.... thod.... di.... dad.... and he... said that.... he hates me....
He start crying saying this & this effecting his health.... he start taking heavy breath and this scared manav & kunj both..... kunj immediately come toward him & cups his face...
Kun(crying):kiddo....
Manik look toward kunj & become little bit normal & kunj is just gazing him painfully.... like he is savouring his image for last time.....
Man(slowly):Mr kunj... please mera time mat waste kijiye... waise bhi mere pass ab kewal ek kuch hi waqt bacha hai...
Kunj get startled
Kun(composing himself) Toh theek hai..... Rakh apna waqt apne pass..... mujhe kewal paanch minute de de..... Mujhe tujhse kuch kehna hai.....
Man(formally): Kahiye...
Kunj feels very bad listening his tone
Kun: Nahi... mujhe kiddo se... apne manik se kuch kehna hai...
Man(strangely): Kaun sa aapka manik?
Kun(determined): Wo manik jo Mera dost hai.....jiske bina main reh nahi sakta.... us manik se....
Man(hurt): Wo manik kab ka marr gaya...kunj...
Kun(horrified): Shut up! Wo manik zinda hai... aur mere saamne hai.... bus mujhse gussa hai... Hai na?
Manik(stubborn): Nahi...
Kun(in same way): Haan hai...
Manik looks other side
Kun(controlling his tears):I'm sorry kiddo..... I'm really sorry..... mujhse galti ho gayi yrr..... please esa mat bol m Nahi reh sakta yrr tere bina..... Tu janta h na.... toh kyu esi baatein kar raha h....
Man(sobbing):I know m Marne wala hu isiliye Tu esa bol raha h
Kun(nodded negative): esa nahi h yrr.... tu esa kyu Soch raha h..... sun tujhe kuch bhi nahi hoga I know.. .
Saying this kunj start crying holding manik's hand..... manik can't see kunj like this..... manav smiles in tears watching their bond & left them alone for talking.....
Man(groaning with pain): kunj... sam...bhal... apne aap ko... tu mera face nahi Dekha Chahta tha na.... toh ab nahi dekhna padega kabhi... Ab koi tujhe pareshan bhi nahi karega..... Teri life me koi problem Nahi hogi ab...u broke friendship with me na.... & mene kaha tha ki.... tu mujhse baat nahi karega toh m mar jaunga.... see God ne meri baat sun ki...
Kun(crying in guilt):tu jaanta h ki... wo meri bewkoofi thi..... meri galti thi..... Maine gusse me aakar wo sab kaha tha.... Tune abhi tak mujhe iske liye maaf nahi kiya... Manik please... meri is galti ki itni badi saza mujhe mat de... please Manik...
Manik closed his eyes painfully.... which had started to water...... Kunj watched him like this..... he got dead scared.....
Man(shaking him): manik aakhein khol... Manik... please...
Manik opened his eyes....
Manik: Abhi mara nahi hoon.
Kun(angrily): Manikk....
He put his hand on his heart..... which was beating very fast as if it wanted to complete it's work now itself.....
Man(slowly):I know.... I'm very bad.... but please don't hate me bunny....
Kunj can't able to control himself he immediately hugs him..... but carefully without hurting him..... manik also feels peace which he badly want.....
After sometime manik start taking heavy breath...... he was sinking.... his heartbeat was lowering..... kunj immediately broke the hug and get horrified watching him like this.....
Kun(scared):m..Mani..kk (shouts) doctor... Doctor...
Doctor immediately enter inside & start his treatment.... ward boy tried to take kunj away..... But manik is not leaving his hand....
Kun(pleading): Nahi please main nahi jaunga... please mujhe rehnedo please agar main gaya to manik...
Man(with long breaths): k...ku..n...j..
Doctors put oxygen mask and got ready to give manik shocks..... Thrice shocks were given to him.... but no improvement manik's eyes were closing.....
Kun(shrieking): manik... nahi... mujhe chod kar nahi jaoge tum... main tumhe nahi jaaney dunga... Manik...
Manik's hand slips from kunj's grip.... kunj looks toward him with horror after feeling this..... manik's head rolled to one side...... The machine stopped showing his pulse.....
Kun(screams): manikkk.. .
He immediately hugs him & start crying vigorously.... all enters inside listening his voice & the scene in front of them make them confused.....or I say they know what happens but don't want to believe....
Kun(shaking manik): Tu... nahi.... ja.... sakta ese.... mujhe chod k..... uth na manik.... please don't play this type of prank.... (sobbing) please manik..... please.... get up.... tujhe jitna gussa Karna h.... kar lena m sab seh lunga..... but Tu esa nahi Kar sakta..... manik mar jaunga m yrr.....
Kunj was crying vigorously..... he still don't want to believe that manik left him..... he still have hope..... whereas manav was just standing numb and others r also crying.....
Doc:I'm sorry Mr malhotra.... but he is no more.....
Kunj went numb listening this..... he felt like someone snatch floor beneath his feet & others get stunned....
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Precap: kunj's life without manik
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