Tip 3: Wording
Okay, so I owe an apology to the person who requested this, "Gooooomen, Imma lazy panda~".
But I finally got around to writing this, lol, so here you go.
Wording:
So wording is a very important part of your story. The words you chose to use will affect how readers react to it. If you chose repetitive and bland words readers will lose interest quickly.
Okay okay, that's nice and all, but what do I do, Panda-San??? (」゜ロ゜)」
It's simple really, before publishing a chapter, read over it and scan for a word that is repeated often. Then go online or pull out your handy-dandy thesaurus and find a few words to use instead.
For example if I use 'said' a lot, I just go on google and type in ' Syn said' (synonyms for said). See you don't even have to type up the entire word! It's not that hard.
Don't be lazy. ヽ(  ̄д ̄;)ノ
A major turn off whenever I read books is when I see the same word over and over especially if they are in the same sentence.
But if you are lazy...here's a list of words to use in place of said, since that's what the person requested anyway :P
In a happy way
O(≧▽≦)O
laughed
rejoiced
giggled
joked
lilted
sang out
In a sad way
(*'°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥﹏°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ )人('°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥ω°̥̥̥̥̥̥̥̥`)
cried
agonized
bawled
blubbered
lamented
sobbed
groaned
sniveled
wept
mourned
In a bossy way
(`_')ゞ
insisted
bossed
demanded
preached
dictated
professed
ordered
In an angry way
ლ(ಠ益ಠ)ლ
raged
miffed
seethed
fumed
retorted
thundered
blurted
In a pained way
o(╥﹏╥)o
barked
cried out
cried
screamed
jabbered
bellowed
groaned
howled
shrieked
roared
grieved
wailed
yelped
In a frightened way
=͟͟͞͞ =͟͟͞͞ ヘ( 'Д')ノ
quaked
stammered
shuddered
quivered
trembled
In a understanding way
\( ̄□ ̄)\
empathized
accepted
consoled
crooned
comforted
sympathized
agreed
In a tired way
(-, - )...zzzZZZ
mumbled
struggled
emitted
wearied
In a begging way
(ι'Д`)ノ
beseeched
begged
implored
pleaded
entreated
appealed to
As an answer
ヾ(。 ̄□ ̄)ツ
responded
retorted
replied
rejoined
answered
acknowledged
Btw I got these all from online....
What I though you took the time to do this yourself! L(・o・)」
Psh..Hell no! Imma lazy Panda, ( ̄ー ̄ )ノ but I hope that helps :P
Comment below on other tips you want!^^
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