ICHS: MY SUBCONSCIOUS AND I by Favoursing

Reviewed by sophie_swadil

TITLE: My subconscious and I is a good title because the book mainly talks about a girl called Campbell and her subconscious helping her with her traumas and highschool life. It has this rarity around the title that draws out curiosity.

COVER|BLURB: The cover do not tally with the book's plot or even the title. It is a terrible cover when compared to the book's storyline.
The blurb was a very average work with a little of curiosity to it.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: characters facial expressions,mood,feelings,actions and visual aspect were poorly described and they cannot be properly envisage by readers because of the readers crude constricting lexicons.

PACE OF THE STORY: Some chapters were rushed, while others were hardly saying anything. The choice of words made the pace of the story wavy throughout the first 5 chapters.

PLOT: A unique and disparate plot that should carry lots of suspense and feelings and also leave alot of intriguing questions and if readdressed.

DESCRIPTION: The descriptions of events feelings etc in the story were very bad and immature.

GRAMMAR: The grammar was fair but it lacked essential knowledge of words and the listings of words were very little.

ADDITIONAL NOTE: The book's plot is unique, Intriguing and different, but the descriptions done In the book were terrible. It's a good work that needs a great deal of improvement