Salutatorian wars By JustNicole0001
Reviewed by sophie_swadil

TITLE: It's a good title, rare and somewhat unique in its own way of telling us what the book's storyline is about.

COVER|BLURB: The cover is drab and sombre, the colours and images are too dull and uninteresting.
The blurb however was ingeniously written. It controls a reasonable amount of suspense, emoti,ons and cliffhangers to get the readers Interested.

CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT: The characters were well introduced but the style of writing( words used) was Insipid. The character feelings and actions should be readdressed so that it can easily work it's way into the reader's imaginations.

PLOT: The plot is unique and satisfying. The unusual plotline is fascinating because it leaves a lot of intriguing questions in the minds of the readers.

DESCRIPTION: The description of the story was dull. Although the characters of the story were well introduced and delineated, the words used in the story were unsatisfying.

GRAMMAR: A decent but constricting use of words figures  of speech. Most words were used in the wrong manner.

ADDITIONAL NOTE: The spacing of the story was dragging. After the first 3 chapters, the story became boring and flat. The long chapters, as well as the overly detailed but inconsequential events, made the book tiresome lotAlot more cliffhangers and suspense should be added to the story so that the readers an actually pay more attention to reading than skimming.