Username: kakolisingha
Book: Romance of the Portals
Genre: Fantasy 
Chapters Read: 23

Reviewer: EllenFairyBlue4

Thoughts: 

Your world had me so engrossed in it that I found myself wanting to read more. The effort you put into your story is pretty amazing. It must have taken a lot of time, a good imagination, and a few language search engines to put your story together. 

Veer is a supernatural creature that can't be seen by the naked eyes of humans. He goes on a journey in an attempt to recover this stone in order to keep another, Kaal, from using it to destroy the world. He does get sidetracked by a very familiar face and a human nonetheless. But then he remembers his duty, and almost completes it, except those snake-like sea creatures had other plans. The first twenty three chapters is basically the set up of this. 

Your story was rich with mythology-- original mythology -- creatures that seemed like you created yourself or this is my first time coming across them. I loved your world, did I mention? Your characters are believable and fun to read about.

Veer is an honorable character.  I like that he is duty driven, yet finds himself unable to resist meeting the woman of his dreams, literally. Suhaani complements Veer in a way that she is able to connect with him on a more spiritual level. So far, their love story is well a love story. It reminds me of a lot of romances I've read, yet this particular story seems to be slightly different. It's different because of the supernatural elements you incorporated into your story. 

Overall, this is a story I would recommend to others. I can't wait to see how it ends. Then you said this is a prequel to another story of yours, which I want to read too. There's nothing in my opinion that needs improving. This story is pretty clean. It's a story right up my alley. I'm glad to have come across it.