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《June》A World So Dark And Deadly

Reviewer- Junective
A World So Dark And Deadly by kennedyrrrr3

Thanks to kennedyrrrr3 for giving me the chance to review your amazing book.
It was a worth read and I really enjoyed reviewing it.

❥Title: The title was really good. It kinda gives a very small hint about the story.
This one matched the plot of the story really well, but I think that it could be shortened a bit. Overall, a great title!

❥Cover: A great and also unique cover. I was surprised by how good the cover still looked with that font colors. The cover was really a unique one and I love it, but I believe it could be improved slightly.

❥Blurb: The Blurb was short but still didn't fail to do its magic. It was a good one,
Nevertheless, a few improvements could be made.

❥Storyline: The story had two chapters with a prologue. My understanding is that Wendy was killed, while Elian was her cousin. Wendy's father was tricked into killing her. Winnie has a sick mom and her father is an artist. In the process of delivering the funeral painting of Wendy to Winnie's father, Elian meets Winnie. Winnie's father has been asked to paint her. The next morning, someone will attempt to kidnap Winnie. Somehow, she escapes and asks a boy for help.

It was a really good storyline. In each chapter, the reader is prompted to want to read more. And the way you wrote it was excellent. Keep up the good work.

❥Characters: The characters were well portrayed. Their features and personalities are well described by you. Rather than introducing each character all at once, you introduced them slowly. It would be a good idea to change the names of Wendy and Winnie because their names are similar and may cause confusion among the readers, but this is not highly recommended. I can visualize each character well, how they look and what sort of person they are. I felt terrible for Wendy's father when she died. You introduced the character Alexel very well as well. The characters you have developed have all been very well developed.

❥Grammar and Punctuation: Your grammar was on point and I did not find any typos, which is a common problem among many authors. Punctuation was added correctly.

❥Conclusion: First of, the Prologue is amazing. It was wonderful. Your writing is one of my favorites. I already have it in my library, and I'm eager to read it more. With your amazing writing skill, you made the readers sit on the edge of their seats. I think you have a lot of potential and this book is amazing. Great job! Keep it up!

Best Wishes

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