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《June》Deep Into You

Reviewer: Junective

Deep into you by kimsuga86

Thanks to kimsuga86 for giving me the chance to review your amazing book. It was a worth read and I really enjoyed it.

❥Title: The title was great and fits well with the story.

❥Cover: The cover is great and it really fits the concept of the story which was about flowers or more like very unique ones, But I think flower could be more visible rather than blurring it off as flowers is a part of the story. The rest of it was well done.

❥Even though the blurb wasn't that suspense-creating or inspiring, it was good to add the poisonous flower part because it is the one that will kill her. I thought it was a good one, but I think it could be better.

❥The storyline is really great; it was unique and surprising towards the end, despite the readers' predictions in the comments that the flower will be used to kill her. The chapters intrigued me, which led to me reading more and more. It is a great plot and I read it with so much interest.

❥Characters: Tae's character was very well portrayed and you have managed to perfectly write his character as a self-centered psycho. In the beginning, never have I thought he was one until I started reaching towards the ending. You have managed to settle down the mood of the story slowly towards the end rather than making it all of a sudden. Lily's character with Jungkook's was great too, But Tae's was the best as it was his pov only.

❥Grammar and Punctuations: Comparing to my past experience of reviewing your other books
here your writing style as well as your grammar and punctuation have improved a lot.
And as usual, no typos were found. Keep practicing dear.

❥Conclusion: The story was a great one with a unique plot. And to be honest, all your
books have a very unique ending, it looks like you are being pro at it. Keep up the
work and your efforts will get paid off. Good Luck dear!!

Best Wishes.

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