Reviewer: Junective

Love, from the graveyard by kimsuga86

Thanks to kimsuga86 for letting me review her book...
The story is really heartwarming and I enjoyed it a lot.

❥Title: The title sets the mood of your story as Jin (who is part of the world's biggest band, BTS) and Luce meet in a cemetery. Although the title was good, I believe it could be improved slightly.

❥Cover: The cover wasn't all that eye-catching, so I proposed changing the background so that it could be more appealing since the cover is what first draws the reader's attention.

❥Blurb: The blurb was well written. It's a great choice of words, but I think it could have been longer. It's still a good one.

❥Storyline: After reading the story, I understood that.

Jin and Luce met in a graveyard while speaking to their beloveds who had died. As a college student, Luce lives alone, while Jin is a wealthy man from New York. The first friend Jin had in Korea was Luce. Many of the places they visited together provided them with some memorable moments. A few days later, Jin invites Jiso (Blackpink member) and Luce for dinner. Jisoo and Luce then become good friends. Luce was under the impression jisoo and Jin was more than friends and they were getting married soon. Afterward, she goes to her comfort place where Jin will confess to her. (I tried to make it short) .

❥Characters: You described every character well, except for Luce who is the reader. You captured their feelings perfectly. The characters appeared more real. You endowed them with good personalities. As I read the story, I understood that Luce is a Korean girl. However, her name doesn't sound like a Korean girl's name, but it's not a big deal. Aside from that, I really liked the name and the rest of the characters were well portrayed.

❥Grammar and punctuation: You have a lot of mistakes in your grammar like using verbs like 'come' and 'try' for actions that have already occurred. Instead, you should be using 'tried' and 'came' (these are some examples), But the one thing I am happy about is that you have managed to avoid typos. I haven't spotted any typos in your story which is good as this is the mistake many writers make. Several of the sentences were very long, making them hard to read, so try breaking them up. You have also left out some punctuation such as a "," and all in some places...I think some editing would suffice,  the many grammatical errors and lack of punctuation in some parts of the story.

❥Conclusion: First of all, you made my heart feel jealous, happy, and warm during this emotional journey. Rather than growing at a rapid pace, their love blossomed slowly. In every moment, I felt every emotion. It was a heartwarming story with a satisfying ending. It was a worthwhile read. There were some grammatical errors in the beginning chapters that were corrected and lessened in the ending chapters. It was such a wonderful story that I was moved to tears. Overall, the plot was interesting and could use some editing.