Reviewer- Junective

Petrichor by kimsuga86

Thanks to kimsuga86 for letting me review her book.

It was a really good book with an amazing twist, I loved it!!

❥Title: A unique and well-written title. In the same way as your other book that I reviewed, this book also captures the mood of the story. I love the way your title is incorporated into the plot. That was really well done.

❥Cover: The cover was beautiful but not that attention-grabbing. The first thing a reader notices about a book is its cover, so I believe that you should improve it slightly. Overall, it's a simple and pretty cover.

❥The blurb was well written. What I like the most is how you added one of Suga's dialogues, "Welcome to my world, the world of the invisible. Or in the popular term, the losers." It was very effective and well done, in a way, this dialogue hinted at the story. It was a decent blurb overall.

❥Storyline: After reading the story, I understood that. Aera is a popular girl while suga (A rapper in the world's biggest band; BTS) is a guy who is seen as a nerd and gets bullied a lot. Suga and Aera became friends after the incident when Aera got hit by a Bike. However, her classmates always looked at her strangely whenever she was around him, while her friends never acknowledged him. Aera thought her friends were rude people. Her health started getting worse day by day before she learns from her friend Taehyung (another BTS member) that Suga does not exist. Sugawa leaves after confessing to her that he has a crush on her. And after many a long time. One day, When Aera was working Suga comes back. (I tried to make it short).

❥Characters: I love the personalities you have given them. BTS and Blackpink members were the other characters. I love how you described Suga as a nonchalant and cold person on the outside while making him sweet, caring, and warm on the inside, which actually is similar to the real Suga. You have perfectly described how Aera feels, whether she is confused, sad, angry, or at a loss for words. However, there were times when I felt a bit off, like when Aera tells Suga what her friends do (this is entirely my opinion, so not everyone will think this way). The rest of the characters very were portrayed.

❥Grammar and Punctuations: There are many grammatical blunders and punctuation errors that could be rectified by editing. Nonetheless, I haven't spotted any typos, which is great since most writers make that mistake. Some of the sentences were very long, making it difficult for the reader to understand, so try breaking them down so they are easier to understand.

❥Conclusion: So that last part where Taehyund said that Suga doesn't exist was such an awesome twist, it actually leaves you in awe. I would have never imagined this ending if I had made assumptions about how the story will end. That's was like a Chef's kiss (Okay I will stop now, lol). In spite of staring, or her friends not acknowledging him, or when even her friends asked why she looked so pale, you managed not to reveal the truth about Suga. I see a lot of potential in you and your works. Great job anyways and remember to work on your grammar.

Best wishes.