Book: A state of Flux by _incarnadine_

reviewer: Kailucy

Cover 7/10

It's not bad however there are a few things that could make it better. The subtitles were blurry and could barely be read. I did like the use of the two different fonts and that the picture chose gives off romance vibes. Personally though I fell the picture chosen could be better, but it's not bad at all.

Title 9/10

The title is amazing. It's a great title for the genre of the book. It goes nicely with the plot and is a great title overall. Furthermore, it made me want to find out what the book was about.

Blurb 9/10

The blurb is nicely done, it tells you a bit of plot, and gives the name of the character. However, there are a few mistakes, 'everyday' should be two words, and in the last sentence 'its' should be 'it's'

Character development 9/10

From the first few lines you can tell the character is guarded in a sense. So the development hasn't been very noticeable, but I feel the character is doing so in her own way. I love the way it's done slowly, but it's satisfying. It kept me turning the pages eager to find out what was going to happen next.

Plot 20/20

It's really hard to get a 20/20 from me. If I like it I usually take one point off because there's usually one aspect I just don't get, or find enjoyable, but I adored this book. The plot was carefully crafted, and I'm really beginning to care about the characters. I like how it seems like it'd be overly cliche but it has elements that break the expectations and kept me wanting more.

Writing style 19/20

While I loved the writing style, from the bits of sarcasm. To the descriptions. The dialogue was amazing and believable. The characters were so well done. I do have one critique I'll bring out. At times especially in one chapter I felt it was a little hard to understand exactly what was happening. I got it after re-reading it but maybe try to work a bit on the clarity. Besides that one thing, your writing style is great and really makes the story great.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary 9/10

I spotted a few mistakes here and there but they weren't bad at all and didn't distract from the story. At least to me, they weren't distracting. I did like the vocabulary you used. It was simple and easy to read, but it didn't feel basic and boring. But if you'd like the specifics I'd be more than happy to point them out. 

Enjoyment 10/10

I have no words to express how I felt reading this. Everything was done nicely, I was pulled in from the first sentence, and it didn't disappoint. I will most likely read on to find out what happens next.

Overall 92/100

I really enjoyed reading your book. My only recommendation would be to go through for mistakes and make sure it's not so confusing in some parts. Overall, I absolutely loved it. Keep up the great work!