"Intersecting Parallels" by Docdrills

Reviewer: Kailucy

Cover 10/10

The cover is eye-catching. It screams out the type of book it is. Very well done.

Title 9/10

It’s an interesting title at first glance, but as I read on, it fits the style of the book. I think the title was chosen well. 

Blurb 9/10

Amazingly done. It holds so much in it. It raises questions making me want to read more as well as sets the mood for what kind of story it is. It’s very well written.

Character development 8/10

While the chapters were each in a different POV alternating between the four main characters, the character development was very good.  I read 9 chapters to give it time so each character had two chapters. And I think given the two chapters there was already quite a bit of development. I'm likely to read on to see where they end up cause my curiosity is getting the better of me. 

Plot 19/20 

My first thought when reading this was that the timeline was amazingly done. Everything tied in extremely well considering it takes place in the near future. 
The plot is intriguing and the amount of research put into this is astonishing.
The world-building is carefully crafted and works well. It's easy to visualize the world since it has some hints of our own and less speculation while maintaining a futuristic viewpoint

Writing style 19/20

The dialogue is smooth and flows nicely. It didn't seem forced.
It was easy to read while having a wide use of vocabulary and science terms. 
Despite having four povs it was very clear which I find rare in most cases. 
The descriptions are great, very visual and I loved the use of metaphors. However, I do feel that character descriptions were lacking 

Grammar/spelling vocabulary 7/10

I feel formatting could use a little work but it wasn't bad since it didn't distract from the story
I did notice a few misspellings here and there but I noticed you said you wanted to edit after you were finished so I won't go into more details. 

Enjoyment 9/10

I enjoyed almost every aspect of this book. Minus the few things I pointed out, there's nothing I didn't like. I enjoyed reading the different points of view, I loved the writing style. And the world-building was captivating. 

Overall 90/100

Overall, I feel your book is full of potential. I was trying to be more critical but couldn't find anything you need to improve besides the few things I brought out. I'm definitely going to continue reading in my free time to see how everything ends up. Amazing work!