"With a Side of F**k you" by   

Reviewer: kailucy

Cover : 10/10

The cover is amazing! I love the fonts used and the picture. The colors used are a nice touch. It fits with the title and the overall vibe. It's a wonderful cover.

Title: 9/10The title is very interesting, it made me wonder what your book will be about. It gives off a certain vibe and I like it. I think it plays off nicely and that it's a good title.

Blurb: 9/10The blurb is wonderfully written. It drew me in right away with the dialogue used. The scene chosen was a perfect pick. Then, you tied it all over nicely with the use of the title at the end. 

Character development: 9/10

You handled this aspect nicely. Warsame is interesting, and I really like how you keep it in his POV. I think he has a fun personality, but I also like that he's more cautious. Meanwhile, Leylo is the opposite of him,  still interesting but with a big and bold personality. It's very well done.

Plot: 19/20

The plot is great in my honest opinion. While bets can be cliché at times, you handled it well, and brought a different viewpoint to it. The main character is likeable, and Leylo is described well. It makes me want to know more about the both of them and see if they'll eventually become friends. The plot is engaging and captivating.

Writing style: 19/20

Your writing style is superb! Immediately I was drawn into the story. The way you write the main character's POV is engaging, and it was hard for me to stop reading. The dialogue is well-written, and you do amazing at descriptions. The humor does exactly what it should, making me laugh. You certainly have a way with words. The only downfall is that the gender of the main character was confusing until the end of the first chapter. Other than that it was practically perfect. The very first line was absolutely perfect as it said so much about the character and the story.

Grammar/spelling/vocabulary: 9/10

There were a few mistakes I noticed, but they were nothing too big, and weren't everywhere. 

Enjoyment: 9/10

I thoroughly enjoyed your story. It was funny, and amazingly written. I love the diversity, and I thought the scene where the friends are fighting over being the prince was one of the funniest scenes I've ever read. But then the Cinderella scene came, and I can't pick which one is funnier.

Overall: 93/100

I loved this story, it's very interesting and humorous. The hate the Warsame has for Leylo is believable and not overdone. And I liked the scenes of the two of them together. I can see some development happening between those two and I' curious to see what you have in store. The scenes with the friends made me laugh so hard. Very nice job! Keep up the good work!