Review on Next of Queens
Author: spinthenight

Reviewer: MissRut

The cover used is depicts of love, friendship and warring internal conflict just by the sword between the girls. I'd have given you an extra point because it reminds me of Moremi the courageous Queen. Five points.

Moving on; story title.
She creatively chose a title that draws in readers without opening a single page and yet told half the story and depicts strength behind the writing. Job well done but I think it needs an edit but I'll give a four out of five.

I can say that the most difficult part was the story blurb. That left too many open spaces and tales to string together but yet was the entire summary of the even yet finished book. Four points.

So the story setting is in the old Africa. She brought to life the regular folktales and myths and spun it into a dance of whispered secrets. That's another fifteen points.

The plot is pretty nice as well so far. It's nice but I think our protagonist needs a chill. In any case, an eight out of ten 'cause I still love it and a five for characters as well.

Now the story content seems to live up to the blurb but then at the same time, it is tending towards tragedy. I suggest lightening the plot a bit; nineteen out of twenty.

The writing style is among the very few that have captured the part of me that enjoys good reading. Nine out of ten because of some sentence structure error I found which will also affect points for grammatical structure. So there are eighteen points for that.

Lastly, the story's engagement is another fifteen points.

Any other change is probably just the title since the story revolves around the protagonist more but that means the cover has to be changed.
98/100.