Reviewer: therosepoetk 

Beyond the Barrier by LilPegz19 

When I first heard your title, I thought it would be too boring, or too cliche. But I was pleasantly proved wrong by how well the title worked with the story, and how there is no other choice that I can think of that could represent your tale better. The cover itself is also very pretty, and I like how it also pairs with the blurb to make a very intriguing read. Speaking more about your blurb, I adore how you are able to write it in a way that gives a lot of details about the plot, but not too many that the story loses its focus. Excellent work. I believe you can touch up on your opening, as I like how you describe the kingdom, but it gets a little tiring. I suggest that you start off with an action scene, and that way, your readers will be more drawn in to what is happening. I like your characters and how they all relate to each other due to a shared experience or home, but I would like to see some of them bond more through day to day activities rather than sobbing on each other's shoulders. But the plot is excellent and it really does drive the emotional appeal, so that's great. Your writing in terms of comprehension and grammar is flawless, and I do admire your use of strong and unique vocabulary. I think you can work on a bit of the flow, especially in scenes where you need a transition from one setting to another. But overall, I'm very invested in this story and I'm really drawn to your authentic style - keep up the spellbinding work my friend!