Reviewer- therosepoetk
Fluorescence by Amanda Amanda_Buenno

I really like your title, it's nice and simple and straight to the point. The length is good, and it's catchy, so it's a book readers will remember. The cover is also very appealing, I really enjoy how the visual aspects set the mood of the plot based on the colour scheme and aesthetic. I think I would have liked it more if the title was centred, and the word was whole, but that's just my opinion. Your blurb really provides that great insight into the story, and I adore that perspective. Just check over the grammar, and it's flawless. I love the beginning, how you start off from the scene and expand more onto it to introduce the characters and plot. Excellent. I feel like your characters are a bit surface level in the way that I don't really take away much from them - add more emotional appeal and backstory to them, and you're golden. The plot is also creative yet easy to follow, and I really liked it. Your grammar in the story is great, and your word choice is absolutely stellar in certain parts. It really enhanced that flow that I was looking for, so I'm very impressed with your writing style. In conclusion, great story, fantastic delivery technique, it's amazing. Keep up the fabulous work Amanda!