"Epitome of Life" By BlazePR5

Reviewer: SamEl145

Book cover/ Title: 7/10 First of all title, which I liked very much. Because your poem perfectly fits with all that happens in life, what describes life. I loved the titles of poems as well because it showed that it is something or other related to life. But what I suggest is to change the title of the first poem because what I felt was that your title only related to only your first poem and not the others. Try and maybe keep something else. About the cover, I think it was too simple. Your theme is life so keep something instead of just keeping a normal background. Something like an element of life. That will help to catch the reader's attention.

Page layout [Punctuation, paragraph, spacing]: 8/10 Your paragraphs were on spot. You had them perfectly distributed and you did a good job and putting the appropriate spacings. But in some poems, like the friendship one, the last paragraph was all done in one. Like the other paragraphs were of four lines then why the last one of extra? Another mistake I found was the punctuation. Not a single full stop was even spotted in your story. You have to use commas, semicolons, full stops to make it flawless. Without punctuation, the reader would get confused about where you wanted a pause or a stop. So do apply punctuation wherever needed.

Originality: 9/10 I really liked your poems! Though I have read many poems on life, I found it really interesting to read yours. What I think about poems, was some elements did seem common, like friendship, and the words didn't make sense at times. I will explain why said that in later sections.

The tone of expression: 8/10 Sometimes, I felt that the words didn't convey what you exactly wanted. Like in the poem, Friendship, you have written bulletproof. But you can use something more appealing than 'bulletproof' right? Like the one, you wrote in that Blazing dreams poem. The paragraph of ants and water droplets one, they are so amazing and insightful! I loved them. When you write a poem see to it that you use words that give more insight to your poem, words that give two meanings at the same time, like symbolism. 

Depth of understanding/Meaning derived: 9/10 Apart from the words that I told, I think you should use more figure of speech. In most of the poems, you didn't have rhyme schemes. It was rhyming with each other, which should. Again, it relates to words. So explore your vocabulary and use more words.

Message delivered: 10/10 I think, you achieved this milestone. Though, not much figure of speech, I think you had some pretty good stories out there. Like the first poem, itself, gives a lot of meaning. My favorite was the blazing dreams because that one was the best to give out its messages.

Overall impression: 17/20

Total: 69/80