Reviewer: Unloveable_Night

Deep into You by kimsuga86

Title: 10/10
- i liked the title which is its very unique and easy to read. It can draw the readers attention too.

Cover: 14/15
- it’s so beautiful!!! It will surely can draw some reader’s attention. It’s good the way those fonts are written and in the exact place were they placed. It’s very unique kind of design and the author surely made an effort to this, so keep it up!!!

Blurb: 10/15
- it’s very incredible, connected to the opening story, but there is something wrong but I can’t explain it, seems like it need some improvement to make the reader looks incredibly excited to read the story, blurb is one of the important things in making a story to attach some readers.

Storyline: 7/10
- I did understand it well but you need to improve the way how plot works. :>

Characters: 10/10
- yessss the characters of the story made me understand them well, they are easy to read and my mind is already making some incredible scenes on what happening to the story. I really like lily the way she’s so soft.

Grammar and punctuation: 13/15
- as for now, I didn’t saw some grammar errors but I did saw some vocabulary words that made the word little harsh, but it did understandable don’t worry.

Enjoyment: 9/10
- I have nothing to say but I enjoyed reading your masterpiece story.

Overall:  14/15
- the story seems nice and beautiful, those words that written on the book are understandable and incredibly unique. It has a wonderful opening scene and an ending scene, the reader surely put some effort to this story. You deserve to be praised even it’s just a fanfiction. :)))) But yeahhh just double check your chapters and fix those grammar under. :>>

=total 87