Reviewer: Unloveable_Night

Story by Marylandgirl_1999

Hour 72

Title: 7/10
- the title is very common and I thought it would be boring to read but I was wrong 0-0

Cover: 12/15
- the cover of the story is plain but it’s very wonderful at the same time and some sort of connection to the story. But “don’t judge a book by its cover.” 0-0

Blurb: 15/15
- yessssss, the blurb gives me excitement! The author did a great job to give attractions to the readers. It’s so describable and understanding blurb.

Storyline: 8/10
- first of all, the story has a good wonderful opening scene. I got some goosebumps and some sort of mysterious, It was so exciting! And then when I reached the chapter two wherein you can see what’s happening as the characters were gathered. But the most painful is it has only 3chaptere :< I got depressed tbh cause it’s still ongoing and I want to read it more!!

Characters: 7/10
- the characters of the story seems to be fine, but they are not that describable. I suggest to the author that she must describe her characters well. But no hate! Her characters are very unique.

Grammar and punctuation: 10/15
- I did saw alot of declarative points that are not placed well, and some grammatical structures which is a good thing for writers to do that mistakes and that’s fine at all cause we all make mistakes.

But I want to suggest that you must re-check your book before publishing it, to avoid the errors inside the chapters. I did saw some commas errors that needed to replaced. But I love your vocabularies!

Enjoyment: 9/10
- I have nothing to say about this,but yeah I did enjoyed your wonderful story! Even it’s still ongoing. Please update fast!! Jk haha

Overall: 13/15
The deep connection of the title and cover of the book are seems to be a good pair. I love how the blurb works and the storyline. And everything on the story but except those grammars, you need to change that :))))

Some of the vocabulary words were easy to read make the story more nicely. Excellent work! And keep it up!

It’s okay to make mistakes because you’re also learning!

=total 80