Reviewer: Unloveable_Night

"Why do I hate harry styles Story" by  DreamingBud

Title: 9/10
-  When I first saw your title, I thought it would be too boring, But I was pleasantly proved that I was wrong by how well the title worked with the story. This is so wonderful!

Cover: 14/15
-  The cover of the story is nice which is you can see the picture of Harry styles and it's connected inside of the story.. well obviously yes! I like the fonts and design of your cover the way it's so unique.

Blurb: 15/15
- its is very incredible, understandable and relatable. I really like the blurb, and I love the sentences cause it's also teaches you something about love and etc. the blurb itself also has a deep connection inside of the story.

Storyline: 10/10
- I did understand it well, and I love your writing style. I like how you are able to write it in a way that gives a lot of details about the summary, but not too many that the story loses its focus. You deserved to be praised. I believe you can touch up on your opening, and I do love your use of strong and unique vocabulary. The opening chapter is so beautiful and not too boring tagt you want to read it more.

Characters: 10/10
- the characters of the story made me understand them well, and some of them are relatable. they are describable and indeed loveable. The characters are so fit on the story, I liked the way the author describe the characters well that you can imagine the scenes in your own head. You have described every single moment in such an amazing way that makes it easier for the readers to feel every single moment of it.

Grammar and punctuation: 6/15
- I did saw alot of grammar errors since the starting chapter. I did actually saw some many grammatical errors and typos which is a yes many writers make this mistake the "typo"
I think you need to improve your grammar and make sure before you publish your chapter make sure that you'll re-check your book first to avoid the typos and grammar. So the readers of the story will understand it well. I did saw alot of mistaken declarative,commas signs,quotation marks and even interjections. Like this example "you did it great" but you need to put a declarative point nor a exclamation point. Like this one "you did it great!"

And also I saw some many periods or dots. Don't add to much dots to the sentence cause that makes it ugly like I saw some like this ".......uhm" don't write like that but it also depends to you if you will change that well it's just my honest review and suggestion. And also I saw alot of wrong spacing like this example "ilove your work" the space. Like imma suggest that you need to re check your chapter before publishing it :>

Enjoyment: 9/10
- I have nothing to say but I enjoyed reading your masterpiece story even tho I'm not that fan of Harry styles but I love his songs!

Overall:  13/15
- like I said, yes! I did enjoyed your story and all inside of it, I love the way Bella described that way and Harry. It's so fun and not too boring to read your book, but like what I said too that you must change those grammatical errors and typos so many readers will understand the story :> and improve your grammars! Thank you and excellent work!

=total 84