Aragons by earlfangs

Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx

It has been a big honour to review this book, honestly thank you for asking me to review your book, it was so good!!

Cover:
The cover is so creatively designed, I love the way that you used your spacing, instead of just having a title be on one line, you chose to spread out, this I like. A little problem I have with it, but it’s more just my personal opinion but I don’t like that the necklace that is having off of the ‘G’ in the title is covering the ‘N’ of the word “darkness”, other than that I think it’s a good cover.

Description:
The description is well informed with different information and not rambled on, a little problem with it is in the first sentence which is “Rania Allen, a stoic girl with mysterious healing power”, there should be the word ‘a’ in between ‘with’ and ‘mysterious’. Other than that it’s word perfect.

Storyline:
This is my first time reading a dark fantasy themed story, and I enjoyed it immensely, it’s true to its sub genres of being action packed and dramatic, there is never a moment in this story where it is ever dull. Also thank you for including a disclaimer at the beginning warning readers of the dark and sensitive themes, I think that this just goes to show how much you care about your readers. I also like how you clearly explain what is happening in the story, and how you gradually reveal background information gradually and not at once to keep the reader in the dark and to ensure that they won’t know too much. This is a really good story!!

Characters:
First of all thank you for the character profiles, it made it much easier to imagine what they looked like, you’re a really talented artist, your drawing skills are just as good as your writing skills. I love how typically the main character is usually a hero yet in your story instead the main character is a anti hero, for me you’re really thinking outside of the box and that you’ve been really imaginative with all of your characters and that you’ve never worked hard to make each character unique to each other.

Grammar/Spelling:
Something that really stands out for me is the fact that your descriptions are a perfect balance, they don’t go on for too long that it then gets confusing but yet it’s detailed enough that the reader can understand what is happening in the story.    To be honest I can’t find anything to fault, all your hard work in studying English has clearly paid off, you should be really proud of yourself!!

Engagement of reader:
This was a very good book I can’t wait for you to finish volume 1 and to read volumes 2&3, to be honest with you, I never thought fantasy could be dark so you really opened my eyes, thank you!!