THE IMPERFECT HABIBI by idgafology

Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx

idgafology I don’t know where to begin, thank you for asking me to review your book because I don’t think I would ever have come across it at all on my own, this book… This book I love apart from Cyrus though he’s a prick.

Cover:
This I find pretty ironic, I love the attention to detail on the hijab and the small details of the swirls in the background, I find it funny how even though this story is supposed to be about a imperfect girl yet the cover is perfect, oh the irony.

Description:
This was a very good description, I liked your continuous use of questions in the last paragraph, it built up so much tension and makes my curiosity grow, I also liked how you put the words “Parisa Areez” and “The Imperfect Habibi” in bold to highlight the connection that she’s the imperfect habibi and that she’s the main character. You wrote this very well!

Storyline:
Your storyline is not like your usual romance story where everything is pretty much almost like a fairytale story with a happily ever after, instead it’s reality and honestly it’s pretty hard to find a story like that. I may be overthinking right now, but if Parisa’s parents have money, why can’t they use it to send her to school instead of using it for marriage as it’s clearly obvious that she doesn’t want to get married because of the fact that she went on a hunger strike, but yet maybe it could work out as well as it would mean that she could go to New Zealand which is where her potential husband is living and then achieve her dreams. She would be killing two birds with one stone. I also like that when Cyrus and Parisa first meet, we get to see how it went from both their perspectives, this part I really like as we can then see two different thoughts/opinions, and see how they contrast.

Characters:
You’re true to your word about Parisa being imperfect, which is what we all are honestly as everyone has their flaws, for Parisa her flaws are that she may come across as being nasty, whereas she also has her positives as well such as being a strong individual, and honestly even though honestly she may come across as selfish I see her as making the best of a situation and being smart about it as well such as when she had to get married, as she saw it as also a good thing as well as she could then achieve her goals, your main character, I find very realistic as other stories usually portray their MCs as being sweet people, who have absolutely nothing wrong with them at all and that they’re literally perfect which isn’t possible as no one is really perfect at all, as for your male lead Cyrus, he’s such a jerk I mean how can you judge someone based on their appearance I mean even though he has good looks his off putting personality overpowers them.

Grammar/Spelling:
Thank you for including definitions, I really appreciate it. To be honest with you I couldn’t find any mistakes at all, and I’ve reread this story multiple times, so I have nothing to say here except for well done and good job proofreading!!

Engagement of the reader:
Honestly I don’t know what to say, you’ve literally made me speechless on what to say here, that I just voted the chapters instead because of how great it was, I cannot wait for you to update!!