Throne of Dragonix by Baqkns

Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx

Thank you to Baqkns for giving me the opportunity to read my first story with a dragon themed concept, it was really good I enjoyed it immensely!

Cover:
The cover chosen for the book is simple yet so very detailed for example in the background, there are blue outlines of a dragon and with another person (I’m not so sure who it is, sorry) I love how you went the extra mile to pay attention to every single detail. I know this doesn’t really have anything to do with the book but the covers that your friend made they are really good, to me they kind of remind me of movie posters and for me I just find it really aesthetically pleasing, well done to both of you!!

Description:
I love that in your description you’ve included questions it feels as though you are actually asking the reader for the answer and making them a part of the story. Also the quote at the beginning, my god that was really powerful, you instantly had my attention. All in all, good description, filled with information regarding to the storyline, there are no grammar mistakes whatsoever. Very well done!!

Storyline:
I will admit at first, I was a bit confused about what was going on, so thank you for providing a description in ‘Dragonix’ for my dumb brain. Something I’ve noticed is that you rarely come across stories about dragons, and I think the fact that you’ve provided terminologies at the end of the book shows how much effort into your book. This is such a interesting concept. Omg the fact that you go so in-depth into every paragraph, makes it easy to imagine how the scene is set up and instantly makes the reader want to carry on reading. The fact that you also tell the story from different points of view makes it just the more interesting by seeing things from a different perspective. So I really recommend the book!!

Characters:
All of the characters’ names are so imaginative and well thought out (for me I really love the names of the different clans.Each character has their own personality which I really like. Despite the main character not making a official appearance until chapter 4, you instantly love her, for how she’s such a strong, respectable person and how’s she’s not afraid to speak what’s on her mind. The fact that even though you just introduced her later in the story yet people still know that she’s the main, shows your skill at writing and how good you are at, don’t stop writing ok?

Grammar/Spelling:
I love the constant change from the past tense to the present tense, this shows how much of a important connection the events from the past have on the present. Something I do wonder is that why are there really huge spaces between the names of the clans and the colons? It’s just something I’m curious about. Asides from that there are some little grammar problems for example, “What in the world you do!”, should be, “What in the world do you do!”. This is just a minor error, other than that really really good job!!

Engagement of the reader:
The action packed story makes it hard to not get sucked into the story, even though English is not your first language, you wrote this story so beautifully and I commend you for that, really good job!!