Trapped in a Tale by RoyalPurple123

Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx

Shout out to RoyalPurple123 for asking me to review their book, it’s been such a blast reading your book I really enjoyed it!! Thank you!!

Cover:
First of all, I really like how the cover has a connection to the storyline. For me when I see the wilted rose I think of how it makes me think about how it lacked of water and sunlight, the part that gets to me the most is the sunlight part as it makes me think about how it must’ve been kept in the dark, indoors and how it must’ve never been outside, which I think links to your story of Tressa who was kept indoors for most of her life, so that was a good link.

Description:
There is only just one little mistake in the description, the name “Jamey hoods”, ‘hoods’ doesn’t have a capital letter as it’s a surname, but other than that I can’t fault anymore of it all, it’s perfect, it was just that one little mistake. Good job!!

Storyline:
This is something that has mostly to do with me, but I have rarely ever read books where the protagonist was male, so this was something that was new to me, also I like how you made the word “loser” in bold, that made me laugh, I love how in this story there are so many different events happening and yet they still somehow have a tie together, but yet it doesn’t clash together, I think it’s great that Jamey and his dad’s relationship is on the mend. Something I would really love to read about is the story of Jamey’s parents, how they met, how they fell in love, what happened between them and so on, but this is just my personal opinion.

Characters:
Each character has their own story which I think it’s amazing cos usually some don’t and are just background/minor characters, I also love how every character gets to narrate as well and it’s just not one person doing it, we get to see such a bigger picture of the storyline and get a better understanding of it. I really wanna know more of Jamey’s mum and find our what  happened to her. But these characters are very very good, very well done!!

Grammar/Spelling:
Honestly, I can’t fault it at all, I can’t Gina anything wrong with it at all, it’s like you’re trying to put me out of my job (joking). But, seriously wow… Just wow, it’s just absolute perfection I really can’t fault any of it all of the spelling is correct, so is the grammar. Your sentence structure and paragraphs are good. All in all, it’s word perfect, you should be really proud of yourself!!

Engagement of the reader:
There is so much happening in the story, that I couldn’t stop reading at all, that’s how pulled into the story I was, I look forward to being able to read more chapters of it once you update.