Valkyrie: Life of a Warrior by MarvelDan6

Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx

To kick things of, thank you MarvelDan6 for providing me with a really good book to read, seriously you’ve worked so hard on this book, you really should be proud of yourself!!

Cover:
It has such a mystical feel to it, that honestly it gives me a little bit of the shivers lol, and very well done for making sure Jj looks exactly as she’s being described in the story (I really like her hair colour, I might even dye my hair midnight black like hers), this is such a beautiful detailed cover, I especially like the details in the background.

Description:
The description is very well written, the only problem for me is that for me it makes more sense for it to be “Tangled in the web of a unending war between the demons and the Valkyries” instead of it being “Tangled in the web of unending war between the demons and the Valkyries”, this is just my opinion and I’m sorry if I’m nit picking, but other than that it’s really good.

Characters:
Jj looks exactly as I imagined on the cover, so you’ve done good on describing her physical appearance, I can also relate to her about her hair problems, hair right? I’ve also noticed that she likes to exaggerate a lot, which let’s be honest we all do a lot most of the time. I like how relatable she is, also her sixth sense kind of reminds me of a spidey sense, also I love how the 3 women who kidnap her all have different personalities to show how they’re different from each other, you’ve created good characters, well done!!

Storyline:
I like how you started the story off with a dialogue especially when it’s “Oh, come on!”, which usually signifies that something’s wrong, this means that we’re not wasting any time into starting this story, also the plot of the story has been very fast paced, and to be honest stories with a fast pace are more interesting to me, I mean only 2 chapters in and she’s already been kidnapped and a chapter later she’s trying to find a way out, a problem for me is that why is Jj always fainting at the end of these chapters, I know you probably didn’t intend for this but to be honest it’s kinda funny for me as I see it as a kind of running gag, overall this is a very promising storyline!!

Grammar/Spelling:
There are some small little punctuation errors such as “Seeing how much she tried to flirt. I knew not to interrupt her”, doesn’t really make sense as the first half isn’t really a complete sentence, so instead of a full stop, it should be a comma instead as it would make more sense, another mistake you’ve made is in the sentence “I saw two figures in black capes with the hood covering their faces”, the way you phrased it implies that it sounds like it’s one hood covering both guys’ faces, you should’ve wrote it as “I saw two figures in black capes with their hoods covering their faces”, so be careful of these little mistakes, other than that it was written perfectly.

Engagement of the reader:
All in all, very good book, I am a massive fan of Jj, in a way she kinda reminds me of myself, except for the fact of not having a sixth sense, other than that I really enjoyed reading Valkyrie, I can’t wait to read more!!