Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx

Why? By girlwithnoinnocence

Thank you girlwithnoinnocence for asking me to review your story, I usually don't read fanfics but this was actually good, also my this is my 6th review for you, so I was happy that you asked me to review your book again!

Cover:
I like that it's simple and not anything over the top or complicated that it would make the reader probably confused on what the story is about, I also like that in the picture it looks as though he's looking up as if wondering to himself "Why did something like this have to happen?" or maybe it could also be regret as well, which is very fitting with the title of your story.

Description:
Short and simple, which is good as you won't be complicating the story line or boring the reader if you drone on too long. I also find it amazing how even though it's just a few words, you somehow manage to sum up the whole story, I was really impressed by that, so good job!

Storyline:
It's definitely got potential, I like how you've written it as a kinda diary format, to me it feels as though I'm reading into someone's inner personal thoughts and feelings, which I think is a pretty cool way to write your story, I can't wait to see how you develop this story and see what happens next. I really wanna find out if anything bad happens to Taehyung or Y/n and whether Y/n will get a happy ending or a sad ending, I'm rooting that it'll be a happy one!

Characters:
In the story Y/n (which is the reader) has a boyfriend named (Kim Taehyung) who doesn't spend time with you anymore and you don't know why and you have your suspicions and it turns out that he's been cheating on you. In the book Taehyung is portrayed as being a bad boyfriend as he's cheated on you and Y/n has been having a tough time, I noticed that this is a theme in some of your stories and that is that the male main character would cheat on Y/n and end up being a jerk boyfriend. Not that I'm trying to say it's a bad thing but it's just something I noticed.

Grammar/Spelling:
I can happily tell you that I haven't found any mistakes at all or anything, it was well written, I like that even though your sentences may be short, they get the point across and don't consist of any information that wouldn't be important to the storyline, I can definitely say that you've improved a lot regarding this area so really well done to you!

Engagement of the reader:
Well I can say that this book definitely leaves you with questions such as what happened on the date that resulted it into a disaster? Who is the girl that Taehyung cheated on you with? (My suspicions are that it is Hana). And also how did Y/n find out that he was cheating on her?