Review #11 for an OC by the user @AdminsMind ! Let's go!

DISCLAIMER: THIS IS ALL MY OPINION, SO TAKE THE ADVICE HOWEVER YOU LIKE. MY ADVICE IS NOT A PERFECT DEPICTION OF WHAT OCS SHOULD BE LIKE, THIS IS ALL IN MY POV.

This oc review was actually easy to make since it's short, so yay to that! I'm not gonna go too deep, but I'll try my best!

Okay, I'll put bullet points to keep this orderly:

*The name makes sense, since DDLC is set in Japan. (Also, Aika is the name of one of my ocs too :3 )

* The age makes sense since all of the characters are in high school and the fandom wiki says that the girls are 18.

*The clothes might not work in DDLC, as Japanese schools have pretty strict with dress code. But, since this is a video game, it's fine! I mean, these girls have unnaturally colored hair, so it's probably okay in dress code to dress however you want :3

*Personality is pretty okay, but it is a little messy. Maybe adding a bit more detail to the personality area would make it more appealing :3

*Hobbies are good, nothing wrong there.

*The death seems a bit odd in terms of the deaths in DDLC. IDK how you want it to go down, but maybe making the death close to her flaws. Since Sayori went from a little sad to straight up depressed, Natsuki going a little tsundere to straight up hateful person, etc... I think the best way to go with this is: Aika realizes Monika is changing the code due to her intelligence, she tries to tell the Protag about her findings, but Monika catches you both in the act and kills her on the spot due to a heart attack.

*Her past is pretty good and her purpose feels right in the plot:3

IN CONCLUSION: I like this oc, it just needs a bit more detail and it will go really well!