4th OC, This one is for Mass Effect (2 to be more specific), Let's go! This OC was made by @ScotsyOM !

DISCLAIMER: THIS IS ALL MY OPINION, SO TAKE THE ADVICE HOWEVER YOU LIKE. MY ADVICE IS NOT A PERFECT DEPICTION OF WHAT OCS SHOULD BE LIKE, THIS IS ALL IN MY POV.

This is the user's original art and bro you are TALENTED!!! I love Ellula's design, it's simple yet fits the series protagonist vibe:3

No problems here!

Nothing here either.

I like the amount of detail you put into character design, it really helps visualize the character in your head more clearly. I, as a writer, like to add one trait in my characters that stands out. Things like eye color, bleached hair, or even tattoos. Just thought it was a good piece of advice to throw in. Your character is really good though, with eye scars and short stature.

WOWIE THAT'S A LOT XD alright, I do like the attention to detail to each of her traits, as well as the good and bad sides of herself. She gives me a "troubled yet thriving" vibe with her personality.

I think the personality segment of weaknesses should be left in the personality section, just so nothing looks out of place. It does make sense that her cybernetics get in the way sometimes (hell, prosthetics irl are still being improved)

No issues here!

Very intricate background, I like it! (it took me a while to read tho XD)

Okay, I really do like the background, but my main issue is that it is HELLA LONG... I know not many people want to read all that, since it makes the character seem too complicated, even if they didn't read the story. Simply put; it's intimidating to read. I suggest cutting down the writing and just add these things as bullet points with the main story! :3

I really enjoy relationships like this, friends or not :3 It really adds character to the OC and how they deal with someone witty and the teasing side!

I kinda like Terik, he reminds me of a lot of people I know, uwu.

UM so, I reached the limit of how many pics I can add to the story, ACK! But know that I did read through the rest of the OC template and all I can really say is the whole thing needs to be shortened by a ton. Maybe add most of these things as short sentences and you have a pretty tidy OC!