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˚༷🍒➮ 𝙱𝙾𝙾𝙺 𝙽𝙰𝙼𝙴 ➮ Fake Nerd
˚༷🍒➮ 𝙰𝚄𝚃𝙷𝙾𝚁 ➮ sparkles_shimmer

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˚༷🍒➮ 𝙿𝚁𝙴𝚂𝙴𝙽𝚃𝙰𝚃𝙸𝙾𝙽 - 22/𝟹𝟶

˚༷｡ Appearance - 3 /5
➮ It looked colourful... Just like a aesthetic journal. But You should try something new.

˚༷｡ Title - 4/5
➮ It suits the story will. As it's all about a girl faking to be a nerd.

˚༷｡ Cover - 8/10
➮ It look attractive at first look, but it looks more like a journal. You should try changing the cover.

˚༷｡ Description - 3 /5
➮ So interesting with so many questions... But you should add some details about story too. Only question aren't enough.

˚༷｡ First impressions- 4 /5
➮ It was interesting everything went in a flow. A bit of past things in continuation with current time.

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˚༷🍒➮ 𝙻𝙰𝙽𝙶𝚄𝙰𝙶𝙴 𝚂𝙺𝙸𝙻𝙻𝚂 - 23/𝟹𝟶

˚༷｡ Grammar - 8/10
➮ Selection of words was particular. I suggest you to try out new words and their synonyms. It would give your story a better look.

˚༷｡ Vocabulary - 6/10
➮ Vocabulary was good But I noticed You are getting confused with the first and third person pov. And also you used so many YouTube video at place of explaining the scenes..

˚༷｡ Spellings - 9/10
➮ No particular spelling errors...

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˚༷🍒➮ 𝚆𝚁𝙸𝚃𝚃𝙴𝙽 𝙲𝙾𝙽𝚃𝙴𝚇𝚃 - 27/𝟹𝟶

˚༷｡ Plot - 9/10
➮ It's a common plot but you had your own plot twist which made it interesting...

˚༷｡ Flow - 9/10
➮ Smooth and descriptive. I love it how the story went with a smooth flow...

˚༷｡ Character development- 9/10
➮ I enjoyed it like how y/n first behaved like a nerd but later on after her breakup she completely changed herself..

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˚༷🍒➮ 𝙾𝚅𝙴𝚁𝙰𝙻𝙻 𝙰𝙿𝙿𝙴𝙰𝙻 𝙾𝙵 𝚃𝙷𝙴 𝙱𝙾𝙾𝙺 - 8 /𝟷𝟶

˚༷🍒➮ 𝙵𝙸𝙽𝙰𝙻 𝚁𝙴𝚅𝙸𝙴𝚆 𝙸𝙽 𝚂𝙷𝙾𝚁𝚃 𝚃𝙾 𝚂𝚄𝙼𝙼𝙰𝚁𝙸𝚂𝙴 𝙴𝚅𝚁𝚈𝚃𝙷𝙸𝙽𝙶 : - Focus on vocabulary Everything else is good... You need to improve in things like first and third person pov... And also try using more words at place of YouTube video...

˚༷🍒➮ 𝚃𝙾𝚃𝙰𝙻 - 80/𝟷𝟶𝟶

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Reviewed by
jimi_shiii95