Book Title: Nyctophile| BTS oneshots

Author: RihisNation7

Reviewer: Blaze

Cover: 3/5
The cover doesn't look really neat. The faces of Jimin and Hoseok are cut and I would suggest you to change the font to another one like annebel or cinzel.

Title: 2/5
The title seems pretty good but you could have changed it to a better one. Your title seems sort of a bedtime one. You could have gone for a more appreciable title for your story like mellifluous or something similar to that.

Sypnosis: 1/10
Your sypnosis does no justice to the content what you have inside. You could have given an insight into every oneshot you write and that would have been more commendable.

Execution: 6/10
The way you structure your paragraphs need to be changed. Some paragraphs are really long while some are short. It reduces the interest of the readers. Moreover, the dialogues could be in another line so that it doesn't look really cramped up.

Plot: 15/20
Some of your oneshots, especially the second one is really short and doesn't make much sense. The same goes for the first one. Your oneshots seem to be incomplete. It's like..you've left them hanging. The others are fine since they're really requests and I can't fight against that. But other than that, the ones you wrote need to be changed a bit.

Grammar and vocabulary: 16/20
Your grammar is appreciable and I can say the same for your vocabulary. But sometimes, the same words are repeated over and over again. I would suggest you to use synonyms in the place of some words and inculcate more emotions. Your vocabulary seems to be average and you're going in the right path, so good job, you can always improve.

Writing style: 15/20
Your writing style is appreciable at some times since the way you write your chapters is really good. But when you structure them into long paragraphs or if you're inserting some dialogues in between long paragraphs, it's not really good nor appreciable.

Character development: 7/10
The character development was not much prominent since this is a oneshot book and the characters were already developed. But overall, it's good.

Total: 65/100

Final note: This book is a good read and I would suggest you to structure your paragraphs in a better manner. Good luck for the future.