7th (RANT)
They make Reader-Chan a freaking Mary or Gary-Sue!
* Example *
"No! Lilly!" Cried (Y/N) as she try to help her dying friend but it was no use. Her friend died of blood loss from her bullets wounds.
(Y/N) sobbed and cried as she held her friend close to her as Sebastian laughed. "MAWAHAHHAH! All of your army is dead and you are the last one standing (Y/N)! What you gonna do now?" He smirk.
(Y/N) growl and clench her fists tight, her whole body shaking in anger, her whole body then started to glow and suddenly....
BOOM!
"Wait, what the fuck!?" Scream Sebastian as he saw (Y/N) turn into a super, mega powerful goddess and started to beat him, throwing every punches at him, killing all of his army and weapons.
"THIS IS MY SERECT WEAPON! MARY-SUE POWER!"
"WTF!?"
And soon (Y/N), a normal human-being, defeated an entire army of a very powerful guy by simply punching them and became the next queen and everybody loved her and she soon marry a guy and have 20,99977 mary-sue or gary-sue babies and live happily ever after.
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What
The
FUCK!?
This is what i freaking hate! They make us a fucking perfect little prick, with less enemies, more friends and less problems!
I fucking wish i have that life! That everyone likes me for who i am and have less problems in life but no!
No! No! No! No! No!
This aren't no fantasy world!
We live in a world where everyone is a bunch of bitches or will cause dramas and you happen to be drag into that drama.
And to be honest, i don't like it when Reader-Chan is describe as " The Perfect Person. "
It's just annoying, it makes us boring, it'll make the story boring and it's a huge " what the fuck has happen " story.
I get that you guys want to make a story of Reader-Chan as a perfect person, but I'll get it if she/he is living with strict parents or live in a strict place where everything or everyone needs to be perfect
But god damn it, your readers will get bore if there is nothing special in our fictional self. If there is no drama, no problems for us to deal with, like nothing at all that can make story special and interesting to read then...... Nobody will bother reading it.... They'll just go read something else.
They don't want to read a story of a Mary-Sue who gets away with everything she/he does, they want a GOOD story with a GOOD plot, where Reader-Chan's karma comes bite them, or anything at all that make us like a normal human being.
If you want to make Reader-Chan has powers like in the anime like in Fairy tail or My Hero Academy, then you should add some flaws in their powers.
Don't make them have god-like powers.
Don't every single characters likes him/her. No! Not everybody will like you!
Don't make them too badass. It's okay to have a character be a badass but even badasses have some flaws in them, hell! Even a antagonist have flaws in them!
This is my opinion and it's fine if you disagree or agree with me. What do you guys think?
Let me know down below.
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