I am well aware this is not a good book. In fact, this is legitimately a terrible book, like, there are no redeeming qualities about this book I can literally say nothing good about it
BUT this is the first book I've ever wrote, and one day I hope to go back and rewrite EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER. So yeah.
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Come on Tillie! Let's go!" "Ok!! Ok!" I responded feeing ticked off with with my mother. I mean, I know that this is my mothers only week off all year, but she could of spent it somewhere better than Elbow! Take a trip to Diseny! Florida! Toronto ! Anything would be better that this! I reluctantly grab my bags and follow my mother and daddy to the hotel room. "Isn't it just wonderfull?" Gushes my mother. I just cannot believe her. This place sucks. There are stains on the carpet, the windows are tinted a funny yellow. Who knows? Maybe even a colony of bed bugs live here too! I wouldn't doubt it. "It sure is nice dear!" Replies daddy putting a hand on her shoulder, "What do you think Tillie?" He asks me. "I smile and say "well, I think it looks as pretty as a dirty diaper on the tallest pile in the dump. "I see my mothers face fall. "Come on Tillie, you really don't think it's like that! Everything takes a bit of getting used to! Don't you Agree?" I smile and say "Nope!! What is there to do in this dingy old town anyway besides sit around all day?" I ask with mocking tone on my voice. "Well!" She fumes. "I'll tell you what there is to do! There is a nice sod house you can visit! And a museum! That will be fun! You can go hiking! I'll go with you! Don't you see Tillie? you can have fun if you try!" I flopped down on the soiled chair in the corner of the room. "Not really!" I said smugly glaring at mother and daddy. My mother sighed and was about to respond when someone knocked on the door. "House keeping!" A voice called. my mother frowned. "This is an odd time for house keeping!" she said, but she let him in. "sorry to bother you." he said. "I forgot to clean your room before you came!" He started to spray some air freshener in the air. I sniffed the air is disgust. typical ritzy hotel. they can't even hire good staff! Suddenly, I feel dizzy. The whole world is spinning around. I crumple to the floor. "Tillie!" I hear my mother scream, and the world goes black.