I get so mad when I see a story that actually has a lot of potential but I have to stop reading after two pages because I can't read the tone and context of what you're trying to say. I mean, which sounds better?

"Lizzy Junku was an average highs school girl except for one thing she had a huge secret she found out that the world is actually a simulation and the voice in your head is actually just the player who controls your life but with this knowledge comes consequences because no matter what she does no one believes her but when Lizzy finds a way to contact her player things might actually start to look up just whatever you do NEVER RESET THE GAME."

Or

"Lizzy Junku was an average highs school girl, except for one thing. She had a huge secret. She found out that the world is actually a simulation and the voice in your head is actually just the player who controls your life. But with this knowledge comes consequences because no matter what she does no one believes, her but when Lizzy finds a way to contact her player things might actually start to look up. just whatever you do, NEVER RESET THE GAME."

I seriously never understood why that's so hard. It makes it much easier to read since you can use context clues to pick up the tone of voice you're supposed to read it with plus it makes your story or fanfic look much more professional, which can get you a lot more reads and votes.