Reviewer: girlwithnoinnocence

Be My Dreamcatcher

Thanks to doTheDarkRaysExist for letting me review her book.

✧ Title: The title is pretty good as well as catchy and it matches with the story too. You practically wrote the meaning of the title in chapter 4.

✧ Cover: The cover is really pretty and accurate to the story content. I love the cover.

✧ Blurb: The blurb is very well written as well as described. I like how you gave small descriptions of each of the main characters without revealing many things. I also love how you ended it with the questions and left the readers wanting more.

✧ Storyline: The story is about Eva whose wife attempted suicide and Charlene who likes to spend the evening in pj's with Xbox and Phoebe Buffay. One night Eva got drunk and went to Charlene's apartment. They made a deal that if Charlene lends Eva her duckies sleepwear then she will tell Charlene her reason to come to her place at midnight. Eventually, after Eva starts telling her story to her and breaks down later on they share their first kiss.

✧ Characters: The characters are well written here. Eva is the curator of the museum where Charlene works. She seems to be pretty friendly with Charlene and is quite outgoing. However Charlene is the complete opposite, she has a social disorder called alexithymia but she is professional during work.

✧ Grammar: I couldn't find any grammatical mistakes so good job.

✧ Overall thoughts: The story is pretty good but there were some small mistakes like you repeated a word two times so proof check once before publishing a chapter. Overall I really like the book. I like how smooth your writing style is and the time skips didn't throw me off. You did a great job.