《Via》The Songs End on Infinity
Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx
The Songs End on Infinity by doTheDarkRaysExist
Again I'm happy to review another book for doTheDarkRaysExist, I'm sure this book is just as good as your other ones, this is actually my fourth book review and I'm grateful that I get to keep on reviewing your books!
Cover:
Again another beautiful cover, I feel like there's a hidden meaning to it, I don't know if this is intentional but my take on your cover is that it is of Emily and Warren who I'm assuming are the people in the picture are walking down a flight of stairs and are almost at the "end" of it which I think is a reference to the title of your story, I think this was very creative of you.
Description:
Yet again, another well written blurb, it's got all the right stuff, a place where I think could use a added word is in the line, "Maybe one good can come out of the lockdown" I think the addition of the word "thing" after "good" and before "can" would just make the sentence sound better.
Storyline:
I can see that you've based your story on what's happening right now, and I like that as it's something a lot of people can relate to and I found this a really comforting read to know that I'm not the only who's going through lockdown like this as you know the situation right now is tough. I have to say this is a very different ending from your usual "sad endings" but to be honest I like it like this, I like that it was a happy ending instead, I felt that it was just more heart touching and meaningful.
Characters:
These characters, I feel like they are actually a representation of what some people may be experiencing during lockdown, I also love how willing they both are to try and make a relationship work, as we know a relationship needs both sides to make it work, so I'm happy that they got a happy ending, it made me smile a lot that they could make things work.
Grammar/Spelling:
I couldn't find any mistakes while reading this, but honestly I actually had to look back a couple of times as I was so invested in the storyline and didn't actually pay attention to the words but the content of the story, I will say this your writing style is one of my favourites which is why I keep coming back to your stories!
Engagement of the reader:
As you could probably tell from the point I made in the "Grammar/Spelling" section that I was really into your story, if your short stories are this good, I can't imagine how good your longer stories would be! Also I don't know if you know this but even though romance stories aren't your type of genre style, you write incredibly sweet stories where it isn't like cheesy or anything like that but just a really beautiful love story.
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