Reviewer: xFall3nang3lx

We Saw Each From The Opposite Ends by doTheDarkRaysExist

Well to start of with, I've always been a fan of your stories doTheDarkRaysExist , especially your short stories and I can't believe how lucky I am to get the opportunity to review one of your books again, so thank you!

Cover:
While it is a very pretty cover and has very aesthetically pleasing colours, I wonder if maybe you could make the cover more eye catching, such as you could have both of them standing at the very far left and right of the cover and maybe have different backgrounds as well and maybe walking towards the middle of the cover looking as though they were going to meet, I feel that this idea may work better with the title of your story, however this is just my thought.

Description:
I like how you emphasised the word "see"
to further show the connection with your title, you've successfully followed the criteria of what a good blurb needs. I'm not gonna lie your blurb actually touched me a little because it can apply to real life situations so I thought that was a nice little touch.

Storyline:
This is such a beautiful plot, I'm not going to lie but some parts actually had me tearing up a little, I don't know about other people, but this story is actually something that has me think about my own life and reflect upon myself about things that have happened in the past and how it was for the best, this is a truly realistic book. This is more my personal preference but I prefer sad endings compared to happy ones as I feel it shows that life doesn't always go the way you plan it to, so I was a big fan of your ending to me it gave me a bitter sweet kind of feeling.

Characters:
Not gonna lie Julia reminds me a lot of myself and Oren of a ex of mine, I found Julia and Oren's chemistry so cute I also like that we get to see each of their view points instead of just one of them, as then we can see their thoughts and feelings as well. These characters feel very human to me, and I like that a lot.

Grammar/Spelling:
Your writing style makes the story feel so realistic and easy to relate to such as the part of being in a "half zombie state", which is so me. I especially love your descriptions they just bring your story to life, I also couldn't find any spelling mistakes or grammar mistakes as such.

Engagement of the reader:
For your first time writing a romance story, I think you did a great job, I understand that it was probably a bit harder for you to write seeing as it's not your usual type of genre, the emotions you conveyed through your writing were great, you made clear what emotions we as a reader should be feeling at a specific time in the book.