Name: Hazelflight

Noice 10/10

Name meaning:Hazel- The color of her pelt.Flight: Her ability to easily jump between trees without faltering(with practice, of course. Nobodys perfect).

I like how you said the meaning of her name <3 unfortunately, I cannot give you extra points XD

Gender: She cat.

Thought so 10/10

Age: 14 moons

Dang, she's young! Lol, that's fine. 10/10

Age at death: 68 moons

<3 Purrfect age. But still sad. 10/10

Rank: Warrior

10/10

Rank at death: Elder

10/10

Personality: Hazelflight is a stubborn, reckless cat with a good sense of humor. She loves to make her friends laugh, and gas a knack for cheering up cats who are feeling down. However, her recklessness and impuslivity can easily put herself and others in dangerous situantions. Her stubborness also makes it hard for others to convince her of something, as she will refuse to listen. Hazelflight has a talent for climbing and leaping from tree to tree. She uses this as her way of fighting, since it gives her the upper hand in a fight. She hates water, after a snake attacked her while she was learning to swim. Sometimes, she feels jealous of her best friend, Lionfang, who is a skilled fighter and much stronger than Hazelflight. Hazelflight, along with Lionfang, Berry (a former rouge) and Blazepool (medicine cat). Her journey begins after her Clan, DawnClan, is attacked by rouges and her brother Duskpaw killed. Hazelflight feels immense responsibility for his death, and wants to avenge him.

This is great, and I already know that this was a mix of Personality and Backstory. But stubborn is getting more and more overused as we speak, and I have to take a point off. Sorry. And what's that? "and gas a knack..." XD careful of what you type. Lionfang is a completely overused name, and so is DawnClan. But other than that, It's fine! 7/10

Crush/mate/kits- Hawkfur is her mate but she has no kits yet.

10/10

Parents: Mother: Sandflower, a light brown, long haired queen with amber eyes and a white muzzle and paws.Father: Darkclaw, a former warrior deep brown tom with black splotches and green eyes. He is now an elder.Siblings: Duskpaw, a light brown cat with grey eyes. Deceased.

10/10

Overall, 97/100. Rambles above. (Great job! Keep up the good work, kits!)