Here I offer help with creating characters and critique old ones. Use the form below to submit your OC

Name:
Age:
Appearance:
Gender:
Personality:
Strengths:
Weaknesses:
Flaws:
Clan:
Rank:
Backstory:
Death:
Other:

I'm sorry if you dislike my advice but  I'm trying to make the characters more real in all aspects. Whether its personality or appearance or any other category. I'll do an example on the next page.