I slid my claws into Aquafrost. "I'm so sorry, Aquafrost. I wish we had a life together." She yowled in pain. "Aquafrost? Aquafrost!" Mistflower came back. It was the signal that I had to go back to the fallen Bloodclan once again. Why couldn't Aquafrost just... Understand? My reddish-brown pelt looked dirty in the sunlight, not flowing with the breeze. Oh, Starclan. Do I have to go to the Dark Forest because of this? I thought that all the way back to Bloodclan. Life wasn't fair! I went to that 'Medicine cat den' when I had done it to Aquafrost. Her yowls haunted me. Telling me that I did the wrong thing. But I couldn't believe it. If I did, then I would fall apart. I knew that Mistflower was like family to her, but I can't help thinking... What if I killed Mistflower too? Aquafrost would try to give me deathberries, which I would gladly accept right now. "Is everything alright, Jayfang?" my 'deputy', Lizardberry, meowed quietly. He was hiding when the battle had started. "No, Lizardberry. Nothing you would understand." I walked away, hoping that Lizardberry wouldn't follow me. Some cats just don't understand love! I sighed a deep, heavy sigh. Was this what would become of me?

It was sunhigh, and I was still upset about Aquafrost. Did I do the right thing? Oh Starclan, please tell me! I sat in the clearing of Bloodclan. I yowled my loudest, but Aquafrost's yowl was louder. Why Starclan, why? I stood up, walking toward Aquafrost's body. Mistflower was still there. Sitting vigil perhaps. I noticed that she was dozing off, so I took my chance. I took Aquafrost's scruff between my teeth, and dragged her away from Mistflower.

I started staring at Aquafrost, hoping that she would wake, even though I knew she wouldn't. Oh Starclan, what have I done? I slowly padded away. Her yowls of pain still haunted me. I wanted to go to the river and die. I probably would do that, and meet Aquafrost in Starclan. Or I would go to the Dark Forest...

It was the time. The time I couldn't take it no more. I had to get out of the world. I went to a little river, and found some toads. I hated eating toads. But I had to. I took a fat toad and shoved it down my throat. I wheezed. How do some cats eat this? I spit it out. "Eww..." I said out loud. I went into the river, and tried to swim. I failed. I floated down the river, and saved by Mistflower. "What are you doing here? Why did you kill Aquafrost?" she snarled at me. "I had to. She left me no choice. Kill me now, and send me to peace," I mewed, peacefully. I hoped that she would not kill me and then I could kill her, but that wouldn't really happen when Rainstar bit my tail. I howled. I turned around and pounced onto Rainstar. "No! Rainstar!" Mistflower yowled. She seemed to care about the whole clan. While I was distracted, Rainstar clawed me on the chest. "You have no idea what you have done to my clan. Aquafrost was loyal, and a good medicine cat, and you ruined that!" He gave a killing blow, and I started fading away. "You will never lead like a true leader. And you," I said to Rainstar, then turning to Mistflower. "will never be as good as Aquafrost." And with my last breath, I was gone.

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